My name is Trick Tuner, I live in Maretropolis under the roof of Madame Marelevolent's brothel. Working for a supervillain as one of her many 'Girl's' is...interesting.
This certainly seems promising. I can see this character touching on some rarely seen fetishes, like mummification from all that hair. I'm sure you have a plan, and I'm quite interested to see what that plan is. There were a few errors here and there though so you're going to want to make sure you proof read carefully.
I'd prefer a description that makes it more clear the Marelevolent (I can't believe I just typed that), particularly her mane, has an aura of benevolence and intoxication, almost fey-like, that make her rape victems (almost) want to shower her/be showered with love. I can't stand erotica where people fall into the motions just because they happen to be "so horny and slutty."
I can't wait to see more!
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More there will be!
Give me an hour.
nice
Pretty interesting, but I likely won't continue much past that. M/F is a major turnoff.
An intriguing start. Tracking.
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YAY. I AM PLEASED
This certainly seems promising. I can see this character touching on some rarely seen fetishes, like mummification from all that hair. I'm sure you have a plan, and I'm quite interested to see what that plan is. There were a few errors here and there though so you're going to want to make sure you proof read carefully.
My face before the fic: "I am going to hell for reading this
My face after reading: "Was she just raped, with hair?"
Oh snap. What is THIS?
Very much interested!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Very interesting story idea. Hope to see more.
Pleasepleaseplease don't turn out to be buildup to clop and not be a good story after that
I'd prefer a description that makes it more clear the Marelevolent (I can't believe I just typed that), particularly her mane, has an aura of benevolence and intoxication, almost fey-like, that make her rape victems (almost) want to shower her/be showered with love. I can't stand erotica where people fall into the motions just because they happen to be "so horny and slutty."
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EPILEPSY WARNING FOR THE PIC.
2976476 I guess it was too much for the frenchy XD . You play tf2?
There is a double "and" in the 13th paragraph.
2922285 yes, she was