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Ah, the classic reverse Megaton! The oldest trick in the book!
Nice chapter, also how in the hell did Angel Bunny create stampede!?
Hmm hmm hmm... Are we getting back to Stable II?
Doombunny... The monster that still scares zebra kids (and not only kids... and probably even some ponies), long after its life. Reminds me of Monty Python's Rabbit, for some reason.
DOOMBUNNY!
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I swear, some of those roller coaster cars had to be haunted somehow.
And why, oh why, did Luna not pay attention to what Rarity had told her?!
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Well of course.
But now I know. Although I doubt I'll comment any more. I probably won't refer to her if I do.
EDIT: You guys have any FO:E stories that you recommend? I'll look some up either way, but if you have a specific one, I'd like to know.
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Sent you a PM.
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Oh boy...
I've read a lot but I can be picky. I won't say what any of them are about but I will link them so you'll be forced to actually look into it yourself and see if you like the summary.
Here's my list:
Murky Number Seven,
My number one favorite FOE sidefic. It's just so well done you have to read it. The characters are all fantastic and its just filled with feels. It has a fimfic post but that usually lags behind the Gdocs page on updates.
Heroes,
There are a lot of these fics that try (way too hard) to be Fallout: New Vegas. This one probably does it the best but without actually trying too hard. The characters are great even if the story can seem slow at first. It's worth noting that it was originally written as a one-shot so the first few chapters feel a little awkward for that in addition to needing some proofreading. Stick with it though and it will really kick off.
Pink Eyes,
Wonderful little fic. One of the few decent ones I know that's actually finished. The trend for FOE fics seems to be length, but this one is just fine. The author does speak English as a second language so it might feel off now and then. The story is character driven so don't expect much as far as compelling plot.
Project Horizons,
It's such a big name out there so I have to mention it, but I'm not a big fan of the direction it took. I'm prone to ranting so I won't say much besides that a lot of people and myself have been disappointed with the direction the story turned some time ago and the fact that it has meandered around the plot for way to long without feeling like its getting any closer. The thing worth noting is that it is so incredibly long, and still ongoing, that you might be better off reading other things first and saving it for later. It's the only one in this list not on fimfic and I don't have a quick link for it. Seriously though, a million words is hard to dive into.
Morality of Property,
Great little fic that's taking its time to build up the story. It's nice and quirky though, which is good for a good FOE fic.
Operation Flankorage,
Not much to say because its been too long since I read it, and it seems to still be on hiatus. Might be worth a shot.
If you're curious about alicorns the only two decent fics with an alicorn centered MC I know are Misfits and New Beginnings.
And if you like changelings there's Change, which seems to be going ok so far.
And here is one of the things I buckin love about this fanfic, the foreshadowing. When I first got to this part, I bearly remembered that they had sold the Balefire bomb back in chapter 10 to New Appleoosa. It was such a small scene that I almost forgot it until now and then we see that plotpoint rear its ugly head. This shows how great planning went on in this story.
Also...to the raiders...unicorn horns are not meant to be used that way!!
I also just love Xenith, she has that nice little balance to her story that makes her an enjoyable character
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We're No Heroes is one of my favorite side stories, very well done and original. It doesn't deal with world changing quests and that's what I enjoy about it. Oh, and if you loved the Rock-It Launcher in Fallout 3 then be ready for awesome
Pink Eyes manages to be both great comedy and tragedy and blends them perfectly.
A Cut Above has a great main character and a wonderful storyline. Also, how often do you get a tribal hair dresser pony as a mane character?
Anywhere But Here and Anywhere But Here: Odds and Ends are wonderful stories told from the "bad guys" point of view. Warning, they are NSFW
Project Horizons is the biggest side story, has some amazing characters, and the story-line is addicting.
Project H.I.V.E. is a new story that has already caught my interest. If you love Changelings, you'll love this! Only two chapters so far, but the history building is great!
dat word count.
3050321 All the stories people have recommended so far are great, but I'm also going to throw in a vote for Memories.
Also another vote for Murky Number Seven, because MN7 is amazing.
Great!
I'm going to recommend Guise of Chaos, which is complete, and Fall of Hope, which is not. One follows an amnesiac raider; the other is about thirty years before Littlepip leaves the Stable. Fall of Hope is my favourite FO:E fic, and has linked music in the chapters.
Murky Number Seven starts at about this point of the story, too, and it's another of my favourites.
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3050321 while there not actualy stories i do recomened http://asklittlepip.tumblr.com/ and http://askredeye.tumblr.com/ and the tumbler/webcomic http://ask18carrot.tumblr.com/ though ask red eye has a couple of spiolers for projoct horizens in it
It made me think of this when Doombunny was mentioned.
Meanwhile, in the combatants' cage, an emaciated little green stallion watch in awe as Littlepip levitated out of the area...
But that is a story best saved for another time...
I got plenty of replies to that.
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Thank all of you for the suggestions. And thanks for adding a little bit of summary/opinion into it. I'll look through all of them.
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I'll check out those tumblrs, although I don't go on that website much, so it may be a while.
Again, thanks for all the suggestions. From what I heard, Pink Eyes will probably be the first one I read c:
Re-reading this story has been pretty fun. Hasn't lost the magic it had on me the first time I read it. Though now my brain picks out odd little things to get focused on or notice. Like last chapter, I seriously got wrapped up trying to decide what possible motivation Daffodil had for volunteering for The Pit? I mean... its such a minor thing I know, and not really important for the story, but re-reading this I just can't stop wondering what could have possibly motivated the dude to volunteer for the insanely deadly death battle extravaganza that The Pit is!? I mean, its not like he was new to Fillydelphia and wouldn't be aware of how dangerous and lethal fights in The Pit are. He and Blood had apparently been slaves there long enough to establish themselves as the top of the local pecking order in the FunFarm, so if he was dumb enough or cocky enough to think he could win in the The Pit you'd think he'd have volunteered earlier, upon first arriving. So what notion or idea motivated raising his hoof at that particular instance? I guess its a kind of random and minor thing to wonder about, but in re-reading I've been getting curious about a lot of the little details I never noticed or thought about my first time reading through.
Oh, and this:
*sigh* Am I a horrible person if I wanted Littlepip to respond to that with ,"So... Winter is coming?"
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If Fallout: Equestria is a game I can see these themes would fit these characters:
Littlepip theme:
SteelHooves theme:
Calamity theme:
Xenith theme:
Red Eye theme:
These characters are from Anywhere But Here:
Double Tap and Rita theme:
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If we're talking themes here, I think this would fit as a good theme for the fic itself. Maybe even the Fo:E-verse as a whole. Especially if you know the lyrics.
Listening to it, I just have this whole anime style OP playing out through my head.
STOP POSTING VIDEOS....JUST STOP.....
3054476 So close. Red Eye's theme is definitely "Collective Consciousness", the Senator's other song. Though I can see "It Has to Be This Way" also fitting, at least regarding Littlepip.
Twisted and evil?
Yeah, well, so can Homage, if 20.5 taught me anything.
The references were amusing, and nicely dropped. And the fact that Angel mutied out to smack some stripey bitches who threatened Flutterbutter is an excellent mental picture. I imagine it's been drawn at least thrice by now. Perhaps someone would be kind enough to direct me to such a picture, for the sake of laughter. (Two elements in one, that. A real bargain.)
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YOUR MOM'S talent is BEING A WONDERFUL AND CARING MOTHER.
Please tell me it's actually dead this time. I thought I was done with this two chapters ago. I want to move on.
Oh, how wrong you are.
Though to be fair, I didn't get it either.
EDIT: I think I actually meant:
Such lovely souls who show up for the recruitment drives.
But it's not like one would have much luck building a sizable organization in this day and age if the ponies were expected to join out of the goodness of their hearts. And abusable power is the easiest bribe to give.
It's classic prisoner's dilemma, assuming you place a higher utility on dying with the dignity not to engage in a gladiatorial fight than on one of you surviving at least until the next round. Which you probably don't, especially if you're sure you will be the survivor.
And here would come the advantage of knowing your virtue. Just as you will want to cling to your virtue, you will want to suppress your vice, and they are generally one and the same. To know how your thoughts are skewed can allow you to recognize when not to trust yourself.
I can't help but get a mental image like Aang in the Avatar state. Except as a pony.
Because usually, "I should not need them" is the hero's cue to surpass all limitations and become his/her final form to destroy evil. Also because she's floating.
I think, the first time through, I giggled at this line entirely too much.
This time, I was more restrained, I swear. Only a little giggling.
. . . That's such a weird word. "Giggling."
I doubt she believes you. But it's nice of you to pretend.
Nopony's as crazy as Littlepip. But anypony who follows her can't be far off.
Don't be silly. Teeth-wielding explosives makes everything better.
Saving her life doesn't earn you the right to have zebra stealth cloaks pointed out to you.
Rule one: only Angel is allowed to abuse Fluttershy.
Angel's other rules are probably not important to know.
And of the emptiness of such platitudes, the apocalypse fell.
It's not that hard, really. You just need to make sure they don't know which trick you're trying to pull.
I bet Pinkie had some way to put it that didn't sound so creepy.
Don't ask me what it was, though.
Also, yes. Yes she is.
Winter is coming.
I was really hoping I could find somebody who had made that joke in pictorial form. But no such luck.
See, that's one of the things I like about Red Eye. He knows where he's going. And he's perfectly happy to share, both the good and the unfortunately necessary, as long as he can motivate you to do your part without lying.
Littlepip usually couldn't say what sort of adventure she'll be on in a day.
On does not simply send warm greetings to SteelHooves or Calamity.
One could potentially send them to Velvet, though.
Red Eye has officially lost his right to die...
he gets the Cupcakes treatment for eternity
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So i was apparently wrong in the assumption that Red-Eye controls the alicorns, although partially correct in assuming they have a hive-mind.
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I also kinda thought redeye had controlled the alicorns...
uh oh by threatening tenpony tower he's threatening homage and I think that is going to piss pip off a lot
Can that happen? Exploding twice?
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I don't know why Littlepip would not try to kill the Goddess. Threats aside, is there any reason to leave her alive, even knowing where she lives?
And why does everyone want to kill RedEye? There are many reasons for him to die but if Pip does this the situation will take care of itself. I can also tell you this: I do not trust a single word out of Rarity's mouth. Not one. Or her Ministry. Rainbow Dash's and Twilight's mouths and Ministry's on the other hand...What was Awesome up to? And what the <random Littlepip curse phrase> was Twilight hiding at Splendid Valley? I expect to find out, and it's going to be great and terrifying.
He's got huge, sharp... er... He can leap about... Look at the bones!
Foreshadowing! (Maybe, I think!) The only effect I can think of is maybe it has something to do with Tesla technology? Like in Broken Steel? Or maybe it's taint, like slag weapons in Borderlands?
"Gaabe? Gabe, you're about to have your FAVORITE treat- a VISITOR. Won't that be nice? DON'T eat the visitor, boy. Don't. Please?" – Doctor Borous
3209733 wait... Your second paragraph, quoted the same line but with a different and completely unrelated comment? Me thinks you accidentally missed a mark then.
Well, this proves if anything else right now that Red Eye is merely using propaganda and hardly cares (from the looks of it from his goddess obsession) about the ponies and merely wants power over the world. And for some reason from the threat he made makes me think he either had gotten a bale fire bomb from somewhere else or had procured one from the Bell farm. Might be the latter.
I love the irony of them trying to escape only to have Pyrelight blow it up after saving them. And of course flying away so that he (she? It?) doesn't cause anymore wanton mayhem and destruction to Fillydelphia. All in all, seems like LilPip knows the difference between being a monster and... Not being one. Especially from judging from the past. Mostly if the lesson was brought to home from that pony who owned the cheese shop back then.
I can't think of a proper response to this. This falls so far in the territory of WTF? and why? that I can't begin to develop a response to express how I feel towards this..
I'd say that Daffodil will soon push the daisies... So much for flowery metaphors.
As they say in such sitautions: oh crap...
Well, the stupid way you got here will require something equally stupid to get out...
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Well, I guess it's a cutting edge technology...
I smell some, umm... interesting experiences Littlepip had when she was young...
Xenith, soon you'll get used that with that mare the plans change constantly...
Yes.
Your dentist wouldn't be happy...
I knew it. It's all Angel's fault...
Well, that's a rather unconventional prayer...
*cough*SPP*cough*
Motherfucker...
Doom bunny, some one get the holy hand grenade..... Monty Python anyone?
3049973 Actually in one of the original fallouts there was a bunny guarding a holy hand grenade that was wanted by some knights. It killed several of them.
5506875 They totally missed a Monty Python reference there!
When Red Eye said that i could not help but read it in confessor Cromwell's voice, e.g.
"Behold! For He is coming with the clouds, and every eye shall be BLIND with His glory, every ear shall be stricken DEAF to hear the thunder of His voice!"
GASP! A whole three percent? Wow! (Sarcasm)
Oooooh hell!
He's thinkin' bout going after Homage? D=
DON'T TOUCH HER SHE'S LIL'PIPS! AND MINE!
And dang, a Zebra? Oh man oh man, I know next chapter will be hell on a stick!
Awsome work again!
Try and blow up tenopony tower and I'll destroy your ass with ten thousand glowing hot horns! Hell I'll even sabe the goddess' horn for the finale!
This scene: my sides.
Oh no, the whole place is one giant bomb!
Angel "Doombunny" is the funniest thing in this so far! Somepony get the holy hand grenade before he kills us all!
Little Pip is a legend as it is. With this next mission she's gunning for mythic levels.
Behemoths- Check Were's a fat man when you need one?
Cyberdogs- Check
The Master- Check
Notes: Winter is coming and I begin to wonder if centaurs appear in this story.
I have a question for you Kkat. Did you ever thank this fanfic would become as HUGE as it did?
I ask because I have seen AMAZING fanfics that go right over most peoples head.
Sincerely your,
Ki_Brony