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finally a way for me to keep track of the chapters i read! :D
Nice chapter!!! give me more also are we going to see any other dlc of fallout 3 in the story?
SteelHooves... No, SteelHooves is definitely one of the most complex and interesting fiction characters I've ever read about. He never ceased to amaze me, even after re-reading... and re-re-reading.
Red Eye; the Equestrian version of the worst traits of Eden and Ashur combined. He's gonna get what's coming to him
3033665 Do not abuse the power of liking trains! It could hurt someone.
In all honesty though, no TRAINing could prepare you for a one liner like that.
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Anyone not sure about getting into it, It's a lot of fun! I was needing a good game this summer and this has been a blast. Best pony pnp system I've seen!
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It is why I love the guy so much
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Yes, he is neither a hero nor an anti-hero. He's perfectly balanced in terms of character. I cried a little when he died.
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The rules are kinda complicated for a person who's never roleplayed before.
Great!
I've always loved the intro section of this chapter. I remember saving the the line...
...as a highlighted note when I first read the story on my Kindle.
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I found them easier than most other roleplay games because things like the character creation is more alike to the FO games than anything. All the annoyingly complicated crap that I remember getting confused by the first time I made a pathfinders character is not there. Then again, I always use the dynamic character sheet that does the calculations for you.
Then it's just a matter of having a GM that knows how to work with new players at least a little. Let them walk you through the game and learn as you go. It's easier to pick up that way than most expect. You don't need to know all the rules your first game.
Chapter wise, we are now half way through. However, length wise, we are not even close to half way through. Starting from here, the chapters are going to get much longer
3035108 what is the point in this
I am going to take a bit of a vacation from this story, just to let it update some more.
(Recently got a Kindle and when a new chapter comes up, I need to scroll ALL the way down from the beginning)
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MUST. NOT. SPOILER.
I absolutely love the mouth on LittlePip.
Goddamn, Steelhooves! You knew the guy had a daughter and you still killed him in cold blood and orphaned the poor filly. I can understand the rage about the attempt on Applejack's life, but still. Damn...
SPOILERS
Calamity has not talent. The Enclave took it when he left. Now he's a talentless hack.
I don't think you've really forgotten. It's slipped your mind, most likely, but it'll come back to you. Just give it another century or two, and I'm sure you'll remember it.
Hmm . . . going in a bathroom that hasn't been maintained in two centuries, and probably no longer has running water . . . honestly, I'd feel kind of weird about that if I were her, ignoring any speculation about just how unpleasant the bathroom could be by now. Going in a secluded spot is a perfectly normal thing to do, when in the wilderness (or the Wasteland), where there are no bathrooms. Whereas using a broken bathroom usually leads to a mess that somebody'll have to clean up at some point. It's just not socially right.
It's probably a good sign that you still can be brought to nausea by this sort of thing. It puts an upper bound on how jaded you are.
. . . I wonder if it's possible to disarm a grenade and enchant it to cast a healing spell on impact?
This'll be awkward.
Really just a terrible night all around.
I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.
If it were Littlepip in a standoff, it might be, you know. She seldom accepts a new friend until they've nearly killed her.
Who does he report to, anyway? And just what, officially, is his mission? I mean, I remember that he's been turning down a position as an elder for a long time, so he must logically have a superior officer, but in practice he comes off as more orthogonal to the power structure. He's just kind of a loose grenade machine gun, as it were. And that sounds pretty alarming.
It's a little hard to trade in your armor when it's fused to your flesh.
You clearly don't know much about SteelHooves if you expected that sort of fishing to work.
In fact, under what circumstances does making a wider request because your first one got rejected ever work? You're supposed to either narrow it or give a series of vaguely related distractors to be rejected, followed by the request you actually want.
His greatest sin.
At least she didn't directly target the supplies . . . today.
I think they all would. With the possible exception of 'Shy. She was never very well equipped to adapt to this sort of world.
Kind of an empty gesture, really. If he wanted you dead, he's had plenty of opportunities to shoot some grenades at the back of your head. You really can't travel with a pony at all without demonstrating your trust.
His greatest flaw.
Really, I don't know that Littlepip could have done it without Red Eye. I'm not convinced of the sustainability of the new society she built had it not inherited a partially-rebuilt Fillydelphia.
Psych! Twi didn't die; she just went for a flight to relax and lost track of time.
They build everything to last. They wouldn't know how to make something that would wear out even if they wanted to.
Family are like the first friends you ever have. And an outfit like the Steel Rangers is like family.
Which makes it hard to admit when you need to choose your loyalty, and they're the wrong answer.
I love SteelHooves. Hell I love ALL the characters in this. I kind of find Velvet remedy annoying but I still enjoy her as a character. Im really surprised how much im enjoying this. I usually hate crossover fics but this is so good. It has surpassed my expectations!
About now, although I was convinced of as much by the first few chapters, I have to say this matches Death Note: Equestria as my [other] favorite story. DN:E differs less from the original story (though it does differ in many important ways, albeit generally more subtle), but regardless, both are just fantastic.
I also have to say that Littlepip must be my favorite OC of all time so far. Velvet Remedy at least comes close-ish--I think--but her design might be my favorite of any pony. Excellent color choices. lol
And stuff. I can't express how fond of I am of this story, and how happy I am that I'm only about halfway through. I just kind of regret not trying it sooner.
Poor Applesnack. Poor Applejack. Poor every pony! I'm guessing Littlepip bought enough DLC so she could keep Leveling up beyond 30?
This could be a very artistic and metaphorical foreshadowing.
Red and black are the colors of Outcast armor, and 'charred and shattered' could describe the Steel Rangers after the outcast faction breaks off.
Though personally I think it's not and I'm digging too far into this.
One of my favorite Lilpip curse streams. I think I just about fell outta my chair laughing at this.
We have reached the chapter halfway point! (But not the word count halfway point, the upcoming 50K chapter pushes it much further from here.) Only has been 5 days for me....
LittlePip is everyone's Fallout character ever, right? High lockpick, high science above all, explore every location you find, leave no stone unturned, risk addition to find the whole truth and always do the right thing, even if it hurts (Of course we the player only do it since there is no reason to be a jackass).
A moment of silence to honour the memory of LittlePip's once naive innocent mind.....
Now a moment of laughter and hope that somehow her foul mouth gets worse. I can only hope someday my repertoire of swears is as colourful, currently it's high quality but low quantity.
Funny when people always say that line, particularly the breast part. Granted this story was much MUCH older before people started pointing out the anatomical impossibilities of it but still funny none the less.
Sometimes the best way to fool your enemies, is to simply fool yourself. When you truly believe a blatant lie, what else can you believe in? The truth? I know this is heavily subjected to each individuals belief as well as upbringing but still a debatable subject none the less. But those who walk the fine line of believing in lies and believing in the truth are the ones that face the hard choices. They always will and those that either don't truly know them or follow in the footsteps, will never truly understand
Wow, I now have a new feeling for SteelHooves. We now get to know more of him.
Orgasms. At least for Homage.
You haven't seen Canterlot yet (not to mention recreating a scene from a certain memory orb) Also, it's one of my favourite quotes...
SteelHooves' awesomeness can't be compared with anything...
Don't worry, soon you'll have your own "private" memory orb too...
I think it'd be hard to explain to the doctors how she acquired those burns...
I don't usually say this, but: Oh my God. Oh. My. God. This is one of my worst fears, the reason I have trouble with elevators. I literally burst into tears at this point.
From now on I'll be reading Calamity's lines with Burt's voice in my head.
Poor Littlepip, everyone's making fun of her.
"Oh my god, just buck already!" -Jessie Nowacking.
I was surprised honestly that there was a bank for memory orbs, guess you actually can put just about anything in a bank.
Nice to see that Red Eye is still preaching like Spell Nexus during Nightmare Night. I kinda skipped through a bit of his radio messages which isn't smart. Interesting individual.
I don't particularly like the Steel Rangers, they are literally immoral foals happy to sit around high on Sparkle~Cola and play with their do-dads. And worst of all, SteelHooves' is making me question if liking him was smart of me. He's a murderer, and if I didn't know the character's future I'd be wishing that Littlepip dump him on his metal flank and leave. He's quite the "curiosity", definitely a vice.
Citadel- check. Also, did you guys that the citadel is the Pentagon building? I sure didn't.
One step closer to Liberty Prime, hopefully
Brotherhood of steel
That's what the steel rangers are right?
Paladins, knights, elders.
Definitely
Rainbow and AppleJack... How many of them get murdered horribly like that!? (rhetorical question). This fanfic really knows where to hit for the feels Good job Kkat. This is tying for first place with Past Sins. Ah, the feels!!
This chapter is the prime examlple of why this story got and is still so popular. WORLD BUILDING AND BACKSTORY!
So applejack got killed in an elevator on a special day.
That is so sad, but not as sad as the pegasus who unfortunately came int to fast, and accidentally killed himself missing the rooftop.
How unfortunate.
Green text in my comments are links. Enjoy.
Being shot on a regular basis.
Pip will never live down the time her mom caught her, as a filly, breaking into her room and trying on her stockings.
Peganazis.
They were ten levels lower than you guys. You're not even getting EXP! Hell, you're not even getting cloth scraps. Shameful. Shameful...
Another movie reference cannon. Those are the worst!
Cartoon humor! How refreshing is that!?
Don't be too excited, reader; any sovereign worth her salt is a female.
It must be the WSD. You may want to see somepony about that.
I haven't checked the stats, but given how long it's been since his last upgrade I'm sure he'll be keeping that!
I don't know why I was reluctant to FoE again. Do go on!
Every reader's reaction to a fetish that isn't there's! Come on Pip, lighten up! It's just nature. Relax...
Wasn't he already rigid? Right, right. Drama happening. We can't have Applejack getting to have a little fun. We can't have inappropriate things like sex, we need to butcher these ponies to death and grievous injury instead. It is the enlightened American way. Go on...
That's better.
Sounds butthurt if you ask me. Yeah guys, it's a shame you can't fly or get promoted to wow the Princess. Just remember you will always have your dignity.
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And sexy eating doesn't hurt either.
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Please don't! This story is edgy enough already!
I wonder how many times Kkat have to save her game to get this far?
Is this why the ponies of stable 02 had to die? Or had they already had a mind to attack it and wanted cost/benefit analysis? I bet it's the latter.
He would have made a good hitman if he hadn't gone into the military.
Appropriate given Red Eye's intentions to make Equestria Great Again.™
Sorry to burst your bubble, but that's how they work, Calamity...
*no comment*
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Hydrogen gas is flammable. It's also cheap and easy to produce. Helium gas isn't flammable. It's also more expensive and harder to manufacture.
Kind of curious but why would steelhooves be wearing a recollector while committing a murder? Or was the memory extracted another way?
Just curious
a nice little byplay...but such a tragic ending to that scene...
8033881 he most likely had it removed himself and put into the vault so that if he for some reason became a suspect the MoM couldn't pull the memory from his head
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Don’t know if it was a mistake, but you mention Knight Buck dying, then them levitating Knight Booms corpse. Is that right?
I have too much to say about this story, so I'm going to start quoting and stuff. So glad everyone at Bronycon recommended this to me, because I'm in love...
Her lesbian charisma, of course.
So, in other words, your charisma level isn't high enough.
1. Weakness disgusts me Velvet, almost as much as Raider decor disgusts you.
2. I find it appropriate that Red Eyes' sermon and the buzzing of flies is mixing together. Both sounds have about the same appeal.
3. Seeing sh*t like this on a constant basis will harden you, Pip. I don't think she's losing her humanity (relatively speaking, here), she's just getting better at dealing with it.
Shut the f*ck up, Velvet.
Don't.
TMW you find a legendary weapon
For a moment I seriously thought Pip was going to get a VERY personal view of AJ and Steelhooves' hanky-panky. I was both terrified and impressed. Oh well, disaster averted.
BLASPHEMY.
You're just made cuz she felt your erection.
"All I remember is you had a boner. I'm not sure if that narrows it down enough."
You'll get my legendary over my cold, dead, body.
Woah, woah, woah. He fired that thing with his MOUTH!? Didn't Pip say that gun was two ponies long? I... WHAT?
Uhhhh, it was supposed to be a warning shot?
*MLG Airhorns*
Why do I not see this ending well?
This is interesting. I feel we're learning a lot about Steelhooves. And I'm beginning to doubt the helpfulness of the Rangers to Pip and the gang...
Hm. Pyrelight is like Dogmeat, if Dogmeat could fly and breathe fire...
I smell a new mod.
First rule of wasteland combat: never underestimate the raw stupidity of your opponent(s)
Just when I thought Pip was running out of creative swears.
Plot armor is a powerful force.
"What did my boner feel like?"...Fine, I'll stop.
Get Rekt.
That... makes a ton of sense. Now we can leave it to Pip put one between the SR Elder's eyes...
Okay, probably not, but let me dream.
1. By itself, this quote can be... very misleading.
2. Is this going to be another almost-sex scene? If so, Pip may lose her humanity yet.
Stone f*cking cold. No wonder Steelhooves was so casual about killing Grim Star in cold blood. Wasn't the first time. And something tells me it probably won't be the last...
Yeah, Calamity's not a soulless *sshole.
Overall, it's good we finally know Steelhooves' motives. Makes me appreciate him more. Velvet's growing on me, albeit like a mushroom, and apparently we have steel rangers traveling with us now... yay? Anyways, story's awesome. Next chapter!
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In this case she just reverts to earlier saves wiping out the future and fixing her mistakes, so it isn't plot armor at all! Just a mechanic of the game =P. But eventually we all forget to save sometime and aren't willing to go back that far.
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You sound like a sarcastic person, we should hang out.
I don't think it's ever touched on in the canon of FoE, but I like to think of Littlepip (and Velvet, but mostly Littlepip) as a descendant of Applejack.
It makes her viewing SteelHooves's memory that much worse.