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NachoTheBrony


Mexican. Polymath. Tourism Degree. Lives in Cancun, and has lived in Toronto, Mexico City and on the road. Likes to give free vacation advice. Unlikely to give you a free vacation.

Comments ( 9 )

Huh, certainly not at all what I was expecting. Well written, and definitely an interesting concept. Tracking engaged.

3A

What the hell.:derpytongue2:

Wow... That was... Umm... Okay, color me intrigued...

Not sure how I feel about this. Interesting concept, but sadly not interesting enough for a fave. But you do get a like from me.

Besides, his four foals to date were all subpar: the two retards Snips and Snails, the severely underweight Featherweight and Peppermint Twist, who had been born with leporine lip. Too bad for those foals, but Applejack was far from desperate enough to get subpar blood for her clan.

Woah. What the heck, AJ?

This is really nice world-building - watching a mare carefully thinking through her options for foaling, along with the particular role marriage plays in this Equestria.

Fun to read, hope for more.

*browsing and sees update notice* Oh I wonder what it is now? *checks* HOLY CRAP!!!! IT UPDATED!

Intriguing premise, too bad it seems to have been abandoned.
Cheers.

Given that Twist has the CutieMark of PeppermintTwists, and is an Earthen, she may not have a speech-impediment:

If Twists manipulates boiling-hot liquid sucrose orally (oripulate). This would has oral burns which could explain why she speaks thus.

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