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Fat1thatyoulove


Nov 7th "Maybe"

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This story is a sequel to Maybe until death...


Part 41 in the Maybe series...Its been a few days since the events that the elements of harmony cased happened, but that doesn't really mean your tumbles are fully over as new problems arise from the mass amount of magic that was expelled into the world starts to take its total. But for you there's something more important on your mind rather then death, its your wedding.

To my old readers, if you know anything about me its that nothing is simple, with that in mind good luck as you read through the ending of this saga... I think you will enjoy this. To new readers I suggest starting at an earlier part if you want to better understand the story.

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Comments ( 25 )

:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile: yay the series is done!

2917159 wait. The series is done...

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGEEEEEEEEE!

:twilightsmile::twilightsmile:
PWNED!

:twilightsmile: for all :twilightsmile:

Hypersonic's right, :twilightsmile: sums it all up :pinkiesmile:

*pre read stuff* ^^

You place the tux into the bag as one last thought rolls in your mind, everyday is a Maybe and every tomorrow is a Might be...but this day and the next tomorrow...there yours.

*smiles like a drugged kitty*

things to burst .into flames or

All in all really good work with this chapter. ^^

"Hey Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie and Fluttershy already left this morning."

I know it will MAybe look strange but, after the part sentence "Hey Twilight" begins an iteration and any attribute of the Iteration has to be separated from each other with comas. ^^

Anyhoofs again good work ^^

"...But we still need to get setup! Why would they leave early?"

First Sentence isn't an question its usually an exclamation. ^^ Or maybe even an asking exclamation, but not in this situation. ^^

"That's ridiculous, I'm not going to stress myself out! I have everything planned nothing can happen. Besides they don't even know how I want things to look or where I want them to be."

I doubt that the first sentence was really supposed to be an question ^^

anyhoofs, else ntsh

"Uh...are you sure you want to go I don't think you would like it?"

...

"Uh...are you sure you want to go? I don't think you would like it."

Question marks 'nd Stuff. but else good to go ^^

You do a very good job with Blueblood I totally would now want to guild him with his own horn... ^^

gooOood work ^^

"Sorry Violet, you'll have to do your own ending."

tehehe~~~

very good work dear sir ^^

A nice end.
A nice end that screams "SEQUEL" but still an nice end.
^^

Good work dear Sir,
In the time I stalked... ah... i mean, followed you and your storyline, you become quite good, still a couple of technical mistakes but storyline, development, plausibility, scening and setting had become quite good ^^.

MAybe there will be one day an Story I MIght be unable to give further advice fore...

Until than; We'll read us again!



P.S.
Wow... now after I read this, the last story of the MAybe series and it had ended... I feel somewhat sad... like I saw a little kitten die in front of me...
I feel ... there is not the really matching term in English for that... in German I would use "Bestürzt." what means something around the lines "I'm shocked, upset, slightly sad and dismayed and somewhat emotional confuse."

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My story is a dead kitten now? :fluttercry: oh,...I guess I need to break out the revive soda soon.

2922750>>2921172>>2917294

No its not all :twilightsmile:
You totally forgot that Violet just became the cutest cock block ever. :twilightoops:

Well I'm going to be drunk off my flank.:rainbowlaugh:

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