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Ever since Derpy heard Twilight's wonderful voice reading to a bunch of foals, the mailmare has been infatuated with the purple mare. Unfortunately, during one of Derpy's deliveries, she is forced to talk to Twilight after a slightly awkward encounter. All she has to do now is deliver the package, but sometimes secrets have a way of coming out.
Thanks to TMP Prompts for this prompt idea (#25), and thank you all for reading. Please like, rate, comment, and criticize.
Enjoy!
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2914407 wub. wub wub. WUB WUB bwwoooooooo. That was enjoyable. Like my story??
2914791 Yes. That song was for the story.
Nice little story here, it felt natural and flowed well. Although I have a nagging feeling twi is using this relationship as a psychology experiment. Derpy crying at the end was also a little over the top, since she only cries for muffins.
2915018 Well, thank you
I'm glad you told me what could be fixed and what was interesting. I thought Twi would like to try out working towards such a relationship, but feel like I could've fleshed it out a little better.
This story has inspired me to post my first ever .gif reaction comment.
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Thank you for this. It was great.
2916295That was a wonderful first gif comment
I'm so honored and pleased it's making me tear up!
2916897 Glad you enjoyed it!
That was so adorable.
2923165 Thank you
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
AWWES that was so cute!
2931016 Yay, I'm glad you liked it!
This story gets even better if you read it while listening to 10 hour PFUDOR.............
Thats a lie.
It still wont stop me from doing it.
2939312 I was gonna be like 'lemme try!', then you said it doesn't, so now I'm believing you're really hardcore. Yay?
2961378 Yeah, she decided to take the chance and I think Derpy won't disappoint
this could be way longer than a one shot. ever considered continuing it?
2973419 I did consider it; I really did! however, due to the story ideas that I'm organizing and the amount of time I have, it would be a while to actually continue it. But I totally consider it a possibility
Flerp. Story was nice, but something seemed off.
3214767 Flerp? Can't place your hoof on what seemed off?
GREAT story, really enjoyed the pacing, the emotion, and the characterization. I do think the ending, where Twilight agrees to see where this goes, could have been stronger, but this is still one of the finer shipping stories I've read
3300506 I'm honored, thank you
I would love to read about how this goes. :)
3420828 Read how their relationship goes? Same here, hahah
3420939then you should continue it :p
3422087 Unfortunately, I'm not much in the writing business anymore. Plus I have like four stories I've been trying to write if I do write. But we'll see. Anything can happen.
3423424 hahaha i completely understand my friend i wish the best for what ever you do :)
3426664 Thank you, and I hope you continue your endeavors and should totally write something!!!
3427734 hahaha i will definatly continue andi am currently writing an AJ+RD fuc but i have hit a block recently
3431487 oh, nice! I can't wait to read it
but blocks suck. Maybe try backwards planning the story? That can sometimes help!
3435670 thats actually a good idea i will try that thank you
3436308 I wish you luck
tell me how it goes!
3436997 i will link it too you when i finishad thank yiu very much
3437283 Haha, sounds good. You having problems typing?
3442085 no its just coming up with the rest of the story. I am hand writing it before i type it up.
3442087 I just meant your last response had more errors than usual. But handwriting I find is better for writing a story.
Keep calm and carry on!
3443362 oh no my phone is wierd sometimes lol
How have I not found this ship sooner?
3444813 It's all good. I was just wondering
3632084 I dunno. It was a thing I thought might work out, and it did decently. Hope you enjoyed it
Eeeee~! Flustered, bashful Derpy is so adorbs. <3
4172152 I'm glad you really enjoyed that. I definitely got a kick out of writing her like that