Welcome to Manticores, Crushes, and Alcohol! Features include (but are not limited to):
—Be entranced as a new side of the story of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic as a previously unknown character deals with , well, manticores, crushes, and alcohol.
—Watch as our protagonist bumbles is way through courtship, making progress—just not where he wanted it.
—Join his friends as they reveal both new characters and previously unseen sides of fan favorite ponies.
—Live life the way you always wanted to: skipping all the boring parts and getting right into the fun ones.
—See a new viewpoint of Ponyville, including never-before-seen areas.
Introducing new content, such as:
—Change, a drunkard who has unexpected talents.
—Streak, our main protagonist
—Change's Pad, where our protagonists live.
—Berry's Bar, the bar where Berry Punch plies her craft. and the location of many events.
See sides of characters previously shielded by Hasbro! Some of these characters are:
—Rainbow Dash
—Applejack
—Ditsy "Derpy" Doo
—Berry Punch
—The Bullies from Rainbow's Past
All this and more, all in one neat package. I can't offer this for free forever, so act fast, before the price goes up! You won't regret it!
AN: This story will be updated only as fast as I can write and my prereader can preread, but never more than once a day. I also have another story I'm putting out weekly updates for, so I might update twice in as many days, or it might take me a month. I want to have this caught up by the end of season four, though.
Dat discription
I got a laugh at a mental depiction
Of a sleezy used chariot salespony
Change x Rainbow... I can see that happening.
Before anyone asks, this story is parallel to cannon, and won't change any events in the series. I will skip episodes that have no way for me to plug my characters in, like the two-part Crystal Empire episode in season 3.
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Prereader stealing first comment.
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Wat.
Can't say I thought of it, but now you have me thinking.
This story pleases me, therefore your life is spared.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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I'll try to live up to expectations.
You left my commentary in there, sir
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Thought I got it all. Oops. Nice catch.
-HB
First I am
So now I shall jam
With some ham
And yell HOT DAMN
...You say not to judge it on it's first chapter...but the title hooked me. Honestly, it sounds like a good time, and it's perfect for the story.
Sultan of swag? I am so using that, oh my God.
Ok, just want to clarify. He's an Earth Pony in this story right?
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Yep. Four hooves, no wings, no horn. 100% dirt pone.
Don't look at me like that. I can say that since I have earth pony friends. You wouldn't know them though. They live the next city over.
-HB
1. I've seen a few times so far where you used Changes name where it's supposed to say Streaks. 2. For some reason I really don't like AppleJack, I think it has something to do with the fact that in most FanFics I've read she doesn't know how to mind her own business and won't let anyone keep a secret even when they have a reason(Might also be because I, personally, hate when people try to but into my business when I don't want to be bothered/don't want anybody to know). Just like there's this one FanFic that made me really hate Rarity for awhile even though the part that was the reason was an alternate timeline type of thing that ended up getting fixed by the authors OC so that it basically never happened. Also dno't ask why I put the second part there, I ramble alot even when I'm only typing.
Wouldn't Bright want to be one the Right side than so that his left eye can see more? Being on the left side means that his left eye is going to be seeing mostly wall doesn't it.
Surprise?
Is this another part of Eclipse's(was that your Editor?) notes that you forgot to take down/fix?
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Fixed
Thanks for pointing that out. It's good to know that someone actually reads these stories, even if their quality is sub-par at best.
-HB
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Trust me, I know about rambling. I'll take a looksie sometime later to see if I can find these fixes. This was written when I had two stories going with Streak as the protagonist's name, one with Change as the protagonist, and one with Change as a secondary protagonist. I've messed up more than once.
-HB
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Think of it as a door in a wide hallway. Kinda like these.
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I'm not the best at descriptions, and this was a while ago so I'm even worse.
-HB
4155129 how did I not notice this was cancelled... still shame is rather funny for the most part, and I enjoyed how he Interacted with luna and discord
Welp, it was pretty darn good. Gotta read your other stories now xD.