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When Twilight screws up another spell, instead of switching cutie marks, they get superpowers!

They decide to help others, and become the Power Ponies!
Meet Zap, the controller of weather and water!

Radiance, the crystal avenger!

Speedy, the fast lightning!

Mistress Marevelous, the split warrior!

Saddle Ranger, Mother Nature's Chosen One!

and The Wizard, the smartest pony alive!

They are... The Power Ponies!

Now, the newly christened Power Ponies must face down the mystery of who the pony who dropped the spellbook that Twilight used was, as well as save Ponyville several times over.

On hiatus until further notice due to a severe case of writer's block. (And a little bit of laziness too)

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Comments ( 18 )

Go ahead and comment on any small nit picks you have! I'll try to have the second chapter up later!

Spoilers already? Stay classy, Fimfic.

Some people want to watch the world burn...
...
I am one of those people...

I can't believe it took this long. It screamed "FANFIC" the instant I saw it. :pinkiecrazy:

Everything seems to happen too fast. There's very little dialouge at the beginning and everypony seems to notice things quickly. (ie, thier powers, or the wave of energy being Twilight's doing.) I also noticed some recycling of the phrase 'woke up' and a lack of enthusiasm or concern in certain places.

Hope this helps. :twilightsmile:

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The stupidest part here is that the description -might- have looked like something original if the author hadn't done out of the way to splash spoilers all over the front page.

In such a hurry to get the 'first' fic up he didn't care, I assume.

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Don't downvote for that. Downvote for the fact that the story is badly written, obviously rushed, and suffering from a serious case of 'tell not show' instead.

I was hoping that someone would react this way to that animatic at the SDCC. I would love to see just how much raw trouble the Mane Six could accidentally cause with superpowers.

When you think of it, the powers aren't even new. They're just their natural abilities turned up to eleven.

Dude, I like the idea, but maybe you should wait until the episode actually airs.

You might get some juicy leads to work with! :moustache:

For villains, I think you could do a thing like in the Teen Titans cartoon on Cartoon Network where Robin's Red X costume was stolen, by having someone steal one of the Mare Do Well costumes and use it for crime instead of heroics.

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Hmm... Maybe... I have another hero coming in later using a costume, they might steal that.

Okay ill just out and say it

GO GO POWER PONIES! You Hyper Harmony Power Ponies!

Radiance, the crystal avenger!
Speedy, the fast lightning!
Mistress Marevelous, the split warrior!
Saddle Ranger, Mother Nature's Chosen One!
and The Wizard, the smartest pony alive!
They are... The Power Ponies!

:twilightsmile:Um, it not the wizard it's the Masked Matterhorn and its not speedy, it's filli-second.:twilightangry2::heart:

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If you see the date, this was before Power Ponies. I was guessing on these from the promo... Part of it I could not hear. Anyways, this story is cancelled.

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