Hmmm could Trixie Be related to Starswirl?

Oh gosh, awkward moments galore. This is way too funny, I can hardly wait to see how day three goes. Especially the morning lol.

Sweet. A new chapter
It seems Twilight is developing a little crush on a certain unicorn^^
Looking forward for the next chapter

Maaan! These end too soon! You suck! >:c Make more!

And also THANKS! :3 It's awesome!

im curious as to what trixie is up to in the human body, should do a special chapter of her sometime.

Still using "Allot" when you mean "A lot," I see. Also, "Are there random quarks" should be "Are there random quirks" instead. A quark is a kind of subatomic particle that makes up hadrons such as protons and electrons.

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ty for pointing those out, fixed
No clue as to how I got quarks though...I'm positive I used quirks :/ (and I know the difference between the two for the record ^^')

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“I was wondering if I could take a closer look at your cart?”

Just posting this here before I continue reading. What happened to that toy that Trixie had?

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It was difficult but I got used to the second person narrative, then I could enjoy the story fully. I quite liked it, some spelling mistakes, but not enough to hinder reading. I do hope an in depth 'explore new equipment' part comes soon though, I can just picture Twilight walking in with 'Trixie's' hoof deep down under.

3087046 Haha! Someone who knows their subatomic particles! Two up and a down for you! (Gotta love them protons)

3087046 although, electrons are not hadrons. They are leptons. You must have been thinking neutrons. It takes 2 down quarks and an up quark (-1/3+-1/3+2/3=0) to make a neutron, and two up quarks and a down quark (2/3+2/3+-1/3=1) to make a proton. Electrons are their own class of particles along with neutrino's and electrons higher, more unstable cousins. Correct me if I am wrong, I did this from memory so I may be a bit fuzzy.

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You may be right, I'm going off of my own memory, too.

So yeah, fun enough. I think "I" have a standing chance at this. But it makes sense to wait six months to recharge for the transdimensional swap. Just hope it's automatic though!
Keep going! ;)

Alright, just roughly 178 more days to go!

...although I'm rooting for the, "stuck forever in Equestria" part.

I like this.

MOAR

Got show off our pimped out ride. All the mares gonna melt in our hooves.
Just check twilight. .. she really wanna sleep with us.
So close to begging.

I have to say this is really well done. I really want to see them discover that she's really a fake trixie somehow ust to see how they react and what they do and if she can even convince them. Keep up the good work!!!

TRIXIEEE!!!!!

Hopeful for an update soon

I'm looking forward to future updates for this story, once you have more free time. I'm curious as to where you wanted it to go and what would happen next. I hope everything turns out well with you and your schedules and such.

TWO MONTHS LATER AND I WAIT.
AND I WILL STILL WAIT.
BECAUSE THIS STORY IS WORTH IT.
YOU ARE WORTH IT.
COME BACK TO UUUUUUUUSSSSSSSS-

Granted, you got about as much magical knowledge as a unicorn toddler, but if Pumpkin Pound was anything to go by, that’s not saying much for you at all.

"you've got", and "if Pumpkin and Pound were"

If the protagonist were thinking things through, and not wanting to instigate a bad sitcom plot later, she'd put Trixie's creepy little photo album into the magical dispose-o-trash, and put it on what's sure to be a very long list of "what the buck were you doing?" questions for Trixie later.

This is a great story so far, and I look forward to seeing where you take it from here.

I hope you update this soon, I'm eagerly waiting.

This is really good, i really hope this is a long story. I can´t help but say it again, i would like a sequel to it.
This story is even better than i thout it would be.

Well... the MC really came close to a few bottomless-pit situations here, in dis chapter. I was expecting something like... something nopony should be seeing to pop out of one of those hidden compartments. Talk about House of Horrors...

“Y… Yes! Trixie is fine. She’s just … stretching! Yes, this is my stretching couch.”

Asemectic excersise! Care to join me?

“Y… Yes! Trixie is fine. She’s just … stretching! Yes, this is my stretching couch.”

Why is there smoke coming out of your oven, Trixie?

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That's not smoke- that's steam! Steam from all the stress I'm burning. Mmmm, relaxing!