When Trixie visits you in a dream and tells you that she wants to change places for half a year, you accept thinking its all a silly dream. Little did you know just what you agreed to.
2951552 You've improved quite a bit on the technical side since your first chapter. I had to look back at the comments to make sure you were the same person to whom I'd been talking about comma usage.
New chapters. yay. I´m looking forward how our protagonist is going to resolve this mess here. Also the clop scene...would be lying if I wouldn´t try it if I would turn into a girl.
2963273 Nothing to do with spellchecker this time though. That's an actual typo from me Must not have realized I typo'd it, or auto fix must have screwed me over
How? How the hell did Trixie get this? This looks close to her. As if it was shot right behind the bed. Did she use some sort of magical stealth camera?
In this position I'd assume she paid Featherweight to do it. The guy's got quite a portfolio in terms of being a living, airborne candid camera.
In the first chapter you talk about wanting to fuck Rainbow Dash. And now that you have a vagina it disgusts you, and you can't stand the thought of a mare using a dildo...
Why do these stories always get written as the horsefucker trying to avoid fucking horses, or those stories where their favorite mare is chasing after the main character brony and it only upsets them? As if the author wouldn't throw himself down in the dirt for the chance.
Not sure if I approve this scene...
But I'd be lying if I said this wouldn't be the first thing I'd try if I became a girl...
Hey, we know that everybody faps.
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Mature tag is there for a reason
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No idea where you got that idea from as I mentioned Magic duel like twice in the fic so far :)
It's set after season 3 for sure
And yeah. Spelling errors are my main issue. I really need a proofreader it seems >_<
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You've improved quite a bit on the technical side since your first chapter. I had to look back at the comments to make sure you were the same person to whom I'd been talking about comma usage.
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Thank you. Still not there though
New chapters. yay.
I´m looking forward how our protagonist is going to resolve this mess here. Also the clop scene...would be lying if I wouldn´t try it if I would turn into a girl.
"Your entire body is spasming and shacking as it goes bright white behind your closed eyes."
Should be shaking, not shacking.
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Heh, no idea how I typo'd that one, but thanks for pointing it out
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Again, it's a real word so spellcheck wouldn't catch it.
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Nothing to do with spellchecker this time though. That's an actual typo from me
Must not have realized I typo'd it, or auto fix must have screwed me over
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Definitely the first thing I'd do as a mare.
Yay consistant updates! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Yes, hes the most super feminine stallion pretty boy in town!
THIS CHAP HAD ME LAUGHING THE HOLE TIME. I DID NOT JUST READ ABOUT YOU JACKING OFF!!!
OMG i laughed myself to tears reading this
u should do chaps of trixie on her end of all this
Yes! Is it weird that I was laughing the entire chapter?
In this position I'd assume she paid Featherweight to do it. The guy's got quite a portfolio in terms of being a living, airborne candid camera.
That was one wild chapter I wonder what happens next
In the first chapter you talk about wanting to fuck Rainbow Dash. And now that you have a vagina it disgusts you, and you can't stand the thought of a mare using a dildo...
Why do these stories always get written as the horsefucker trying to avoid fucking horses, or those stories where their favorite mare is chasing after the main character brony and it only upsets them? As if the author wouldn't throw himself down in the dirt for the chance.
Congratulations... you have now given me the horrid visual of perverted ponies... GAAAAARGH!!! WHERE'S THAT MIND BLEACH?!?!?!
Damn it Jerry!
Not even 24 hours and you fap to naughty Twilight pics in your new body.
sigh
Onwards to next chapter!
*whiplash*
Whu-!?
That came out of nowhere. Lul
That was unexpected, but a welcome one.
The details of the city and wagon are well imagined!!