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Jack Knife ran out of equestria, he is on the run in a country call The Other Place, or Top. He does one job somewhere, then leaves. He doesn't know why he is running, or who he is running from. All he knows is that somepony he didn't know was killed, and all she said was to run. So now that is what he does.

Stopping means death,

Running means Life.

But somethings change.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Jack Knife?
Might as well be Beefy Mchammerfist, or maybe Fuckbitches Getcash, oo, oo! Maybe Killroy the Fierce! :rainbowlaugh:

I like Knifes

You know
The least that you can do is get the plural form of knife correct

BR

I like Knifes

Very deep and inspirational.

BR

This part should really be included in the prologue, not the first chapter.

You have minor spelling errors but other then that great story. Ill keep in touch... Boston out.

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3115941 first off, I love the Boston part, next I also like how you are not being rude about my story, also for those who are, I wrote this on the metro on my iphone so I am sorry if there are spelling errors and that other problems. Also I didn't choose the name

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