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Calla Lily



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The Spring Sunrise is in the morning, and the two regal sisters try to get closer in their little time alone. Both exhausted, Celestia offers to take over Luna's duties for the night, as long as Luna helps her raise the sun come morning. But when the inconceivable happens, and their long-upheld peace is suddenly shattered, anger and other emotions may cause the monster inside of Luna to come out again.

One-shot.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

If it's a One Shot, why did you name it Chapter 1

think of something fuckin' original.

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Please, I prefer if you don't curse. It sounds like I did something worthy of being tossed into the fiery waters of Mordor.

On the other hand, thank you for your suggestion. I'd been trying to think of a name, and that one is a placeholder for the moment. The title has been updated.

Have a great day :raritywink:

2918160 sorry, it's how I talk and it seems like everyone does it. Pet peeve and all.

also the new title isn't grammatically correct.

2918261

I know. It's a line from a song called "Lullaby for a Princess."

2917930

The title is perfect and stop fucking trashin!

2924881 Someone is really bitter for no reason at all...

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Woah, guys. Please don't argue on my story...

The urethral strands fluttered as if in a breeze

That's a mental image I could have quite happily gone without.

2931265 Faust I hate autocorrect. Thank you so much!

Nicely done. I've always loved the dynamic between Celestia and Luna, and this is the first story about this I've seen that takes place in the future.

Do you mind if my fanfic group and I read this? I'll show it to the group leader (he should be ok with it) and I'll let you know when our readings are happening.

2993417 Wow! I feel so honored! Yes, of course you can use it. Thank you so much for reading, and I would love to hear about it. :pinkiehappy: :raritystarry:

~Calla

Great little one-shot! Very well written and moving! :heart:

Comment posted by Luna Secret Stallion deleted Aug 7th, 2013

3002669 Thank you so much! It really means a lot.

TIA!!

Ok Luna, crush that witch!

Ok, this was excellent and I love the fact that we see just what happens when one of the sisters lose one another. I love sister moments like this

For Luna's revenge

OH OH OHTHEY SAID THE NAME IN THE THING!

Who knows the reference?

5707214 Yes!!
Understandment!!!!! (definitely not a word)

You win a cookie.

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