Fluttershy was humming a cheerful tune as she fed all of her animal friends. Angel hopped up to receive his breakfast directly.
"Oh, good morning, Angel. You hungry?" She asked rhetorically, before reaching onto her table and grabbing a plump, fresh carrot. Angel's mouth watered at the sight, and he extended his paws, desperately grasping at it. Fluttershy giggled at this endearing display, and sat the carrot down in front of him. He worked at the treat immediately as Fluttershy scratched him behind the ears, earning a content smile from the little rabbit. Fluttershy opened her front door and glanced out. The sun had just begun to ascend over the horizon. The fading shadows of night cascaded beautiful pink hues across the sky. It truly was a gorgeous morning.
With a quick glance to the sky, she saw a cyan blur dashing through the air. Rainbow Dash was busy pushing clouds this way and that. Fluttershy called to her but, knowing just how quiet she was, was not sure if her friend could hear her. Clearly she was loud enough, as Rainbow bolted around and caught sight of her friend.
"Hey, 'Shy. Been workin' on your volume control, I see."
"Yes, Rainbow. Thanks for teaching me. So, what are you doing?" Rainbow scoffed and waved a hoof.
"Some newbie forgot to move some clouds yesterday, so now I have to clean the mess up. I tell ya, some ponies."
"Well, I'm sure you could have let a few clouds go." Rainbow chuckled at this.
"What, and ruin a perfect day like this? No chance! Besides, I'm Rainbow Dash, the fastest pony in Equestria! I can get this cleared up in ten seconds flat!" And she proceeded to do just that. She darted back to the clouds and, methodically, bucked each one into nothingness. *Oh that's why she was moving them* Fluttershy thought *so that she would have them assembled for this. I guess she wouldn't be Dash if she weren't showing off a bit.* Fluttershy chuckled to herself at that last comment. As Rainbow came back down, Fluttershy noticed that there was still one cloud in the sky. She already knew what it was for.
"Another day of napping planned, Rainbow?"
"Hey, moving clouds is tiring work." Fluttershy simply laughed. For some reason, she continued to laugh. Eventually, Rainbow Dash joined in as well. Soon enough the laughter became near guttural roars. They didn't know what was so funny, but they didn't care. They were enjoying themselves too much. After a few minutes, the laughter silenced, and they broke down to simple smiles.
"All right, 'Shy," Rainbow began, "As good as it was to see you, that cumulus is calling my name!" Fluttershy stifled a giggle.
"It was good to see you too, Dash. Enjoy your nap." With that, Rainbow Dash said her goodbye and practically tackled the cloud before dozing off to a peaceful, albeit noisy, slumber.
Fluttershy playfully rolled her eyes at her lifelong friend. *Who else but Rainbow?* She then turned to Angel.
"Angel, I need to go into town for a little while. Keep an eye on things for me?" The little rabbit snapped to attention and saluted his care-taking officer. She chuckled and gave him another scratch behind the ears, which he accepted gratefully, before closing the door and walking towards town.
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Many words could be used to describe the town of Ponyville: small, old-fashioned, friendly. Quiet was not among these. As Fluttershy walked through the market, she brushed past lines upon lines of ponies, saying a pleasant "I'm sorry" here and there as she collided with them. Halfway through the market, Fluttershy noticed a familiar apple cart being run by an even more familiar orange earth pony. When Applejack noticed Fluttershy, she smiled and waved her friend over.
"Howdy there, sugarcube," AJ greeted, "What brings you into town today?"
"Rarity asked me to help her with a few designs. She wants me to model to see if they're proportional."
"Well, that sounds like a nice time. Have fun!" She managed to utter the final word just as a large crowd of ponies gathered at her cart. Applejack face-hoofed. Clearly this was not a day to work solo.
"Applejack... um, I could help, if you want."
"Ah, couldn't ask ya to do that, sugarcube."
"You didn't. I offered." Fluttershy smiled, and AJ couldn't help but smile back.
"Well, I could sure use the help. Thank ya." Applejack hugged her friend and they set to work. After twenty minutes, the line had been cleared.
"Well, you certainly seem to be doing well today," Fluttershy began after a large breath, "What's going on?"
"It's just that this is prolly the nicest day we've had this year. Everpony seems to think that means they need to stock up fer the winter." Applejack sighed heavily. The day had clearly taken its toll.
"I can stay and help if you want. It's probably pretty tiring, doing this on your own."
"Nah, Ah couldn't take any more of yer time, you got plans. 'Sides, I'm prolly just gonna pack up. We've made plenty of bits today. And don't think Ah forgot 'bout yer contribution." AJ hoofed over a small bag of bits.
"Oh, thank you, Applejack. But, I couldn't..." AJ gave her a dead-panned look, eliciting a small gulp from the pegasus.
"Yes, you can. If not fer you, that last crowd would've eaten me alive. You helped me, this is your money."
"But..."
"The only 'but' I care about is yours takin' this bag and goin'." Fluttershy sighed in defeat and took the money, but AJ wasn't finished.
"Look, sugarcube, y'know Ah love ya. And Ah know you love me and the other girls, and that yer willing to do anything for them. But sometimes you should expect ta get a lil' something in return for it. And y'know, sometimes it's more rude to turn down somethin' a friend offers than it is to take it. What Ah'm sayin' is, ya gotta stop bein' all give, no take. Ponies WILL take advantage of that." Fluttershy nodded and gave her friend a smile, who exchanged it for a hug.
"Now you best git goin', 'fore Rares finds a new model." Shy gave a look of realization as she remembered her plans with Rarity. She darted off to Carousel Boutique at a speed that would make Rainbow Dash's jaw drop.
"ThanksAJgottagobye!" She yelled to the earth mare, who just gave a light-hearted chuckle.
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"Hmm. Could you turn to the left a bit, darling?" Rang the voice of Fluttershy's closest friend and Ponyville's designer extraordinaire, Rarity.
"Oh, um, sure. How's this?" Fluttershy was always nervous being observed, even by her best friends.
"Perfect! Oh, Fluttershy, I simply must thank you again for agreeing to assist me. I don't know what I'd do without you!"
"It's nothing, really. Anything for a friend."
"It most certainly isn't nothing. I know you keep yourself preoccupied with your animals. You hardly ever have time for yourself. I just wish you would let me give you something. Business has been slow as of late, but I'll gladly spare what I can."
"That's really not necessary. I don't mind helping you. No charge. But now that you mention it, I have been wondering lately, what do you do with all of the money you save?" Rarity's face gained the slightest shade of pink to it.
"Well, I was hoping to keep that quiet. But you are my closest friend, Fluttershy. So, I'll show you what I've been doing with my money. The next is in three days."
"Next?" Fluttershy questioned. Rarity winked.
"You'll see."
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Fluttershy stepped into her house and breathed deeply, the strain of the day's events finally taking it's toll. She decided to feed the animals their dinner and get some early sleep. Just as she set out her final dish, however, an unexpected knock sounded on her door. She was a little nervous at this, as she didn't get many visitors, especially this late. She had considered just pretending she wasn't home, but curiosity got the best of her. She quickly trotted to the door and opened it. However, the answer to her original question simply raised others. The most confusing of which: why was the Canterlot prince on her doorstep?
I really like the descriptive way you write. It was great! Can't wait to read more! I loooove Fluttershy
Good idea for a story, but i refuse to read it.
I REALLY dont like the idea of fluttershy being tricked, or anything of the sort.
2966298 Thank you! Fluttershy is my favorite pony
2967679 It tore me up to compose this story in my head. I bucking love Fluttershy, but it must be done
OK, which groups do you guys think this would work in? I was thinking "Oh God! The FEELS!" and "Shipping" (there will be true shipping, but not until the end)
: WHAT ABOUT MY PRINCE?!
: He's a who should go himself.
: I didn't know you even knew those words.
: You pick up a lot of swears from customers.
: Teach me more...
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: Hey, watch your mouth!! We're in public!
: FLUTTERSHY?!
: Oops, I mean, if that's okay with you.
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: Quite so.
: You know those words Spike?!
: He was there the day I was attacked by a dragon.
: You were attacked by a dragon?!?!
: Sometimes I can't control myself.
: YOU TOO!?!?!?!
: What do these words mean?
: Ya don't want ta know, Sweetie Belle.
: I finally have some counter-insults against Diamond Tiara!
: MUFFINS!!
: I'm going to go read my book on psychology again.
: Bananas, anyone?
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: ...
: Enough! I am trying to sleep! You have been going on all day with this ! Shut the : up before I shove the elements up each of your !
:... Geez, talk about a drama queen
: Such vocabulary is not very lady-like, darling.
Ummm, I see that I have three dislikes... but no comments explaining why it was disliked. If you wish to dislike this, could you explain why? I can't fix something if I don't know it's broken. Thanks, everyone!
2970917 Probably the Blueblood haters. They are everywhere.
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: WHY DID YOU LEAVE, MODEL? I WAS GOING TO BE FAMOUS!!!
: GO HOME PHOTO FINISH, YOU'RE DRUNK!
: That was the 100% cider, not the 10%, wasn't it?
: How am I supposed to know how many 0's are in a hundred?
2970939 As they should be
2970984 I happen to like the stuck-up prince.
2970990 Don't worry. My story will bring you back to the light. You'll see.
You'll all see!!!
2971001 Afraid not.
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2971047 I'll have you know I am of average height sir.
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But Buzz said that to Woody, who was taller...
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... apples, that is all
2971378 Pies. That is all.
2971381 Well played
2971483 Brony motto:Love and Tolerate.
Tolerate being the important word. It's obviously easy to tolerate someone who you love. The meaning of the motto is to at least show some compassion to those you dislike or even flat out hate. I'm a proud Diamond Cutter, so I also use this idea on Diamond Tiara.
Have a nice, loving, tolerating day.
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Actually now that i think about it my story is going to have a... sort of Rage bomb of an ending that includes fluttershy that also includes death... PM me any ways i can contact you outside of FimFiction, Like Skype, Steam, ETC. I would like to chat and share ideas.
For Others reading this comment and checking out my story I mentioned, I'm Currently Stockpiling Chapters for later release so don't go "WHERES THE CHAPTERS?"
(However, feel free to follow if you wish to read when i finally release chapters.)
2971647 I don't keep accounts with social media services like Skype. (My friends have always been in close proximity) And I try not to open Steam, as it usually results in a crash This and deviantArt are the only things I use my PC for, as it is a useless piece of junk (it has trouble loading this website a lot, too; and don't get me started on dA). So here or dA. Sorry to be so difficult (can't afford a good computer until after Christmas). And sorry to reply so late. I haven't been to this page in a while, as I was working on two other stories and didn't really pay attention to it.
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Oh don't worry about the delay I understand entirely as I am currently Mass Stockpiling chapters for my Story. Well when you get yourself your better computer I'm open to talk to and share ideas. I got a mind full of Ponies. Who knows, we could make each others stories 20% Cooler! Heh, keep up dem stories!
3187115 Sounds awesome. This could be an interesting acquaintanceship (when I have the tools to make it possible ) Until then, keep on pony-ing on!
More story plz?
3273414 I iz FAILURE!
I've barely touched this story since the first chapter.
No more procrastinating. << (This is my serious face)
More coming soon.
3273424 can't wait!
3435024 I've hit a LOT of snags with this chapter. I'm trying to cover much more ground than with the first, so it will be much longer. Hoping to get it finished within the next few days.
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Okaaaay. Internet went down for a significant while there (at least a week). Slight delay on the next chapter.