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If I don't write now, I'll write later. If i write later, it's so much better than if I write now. *internet poke*

Comments ( 62 )

dammit now im crying

This song is perfect for this fic. I swear it is.

Get an editor and think your stories out more.

Nice story but there's a few grammar mistakes:pinkiesad2:

Occassional grammar mistakes (and there were very few) aside, this story was sad, short, and sweet.:fluttershysad::scootangel:

2894768 You spelled occasional wrong. :derpytongue2: Just thought to point that out. I completely agree. This story has a few mistakes. Search, author! :rainbowdetermined2:

2894809 ....Figures.:facehoof::rainbowlaugh: Thanks for pointing that out, though!:twilightsheepish:

"It's suck a lovely day," she thought to herself

I can forgive typos, but you might want to fix this one in the first paragraph - it rather stands out. :twilightsmile:

"This is a suck day."


There are so many way's those five words can be interpreted :twilightblush:

2894552 you...i was gonna post that song. good story though i feel like it was a bit rushed.

Good, but a little rushed.

Pretty good overall, but yes, a bit rushed. Nice job though!

289475628947662894768289480928951022895173 I'll fix the typos but I was half asleep while writing this story! XD

2894500 You cried?! Hooray I succeeded!

2895949 Also I cried a bit and felt a bit sorry for Celstia

2895962 I'm glad I did pretty well on this story cause it's my first really sad story.

:fluttercry:............................:fluttershbad: NOOOO TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!this made me cry so much. Like, so much I could fill a bucket. Here is my ponyified reaction to reading it


im so sad :'( good writing though. I could never write as well as you have

2896184 Aww thx for the compliment on my writing it means a lot to me! Oh and btw I think that you COULD write something like this because everyone is a great writer. I'm glad this story made some people sad because it's my first sad story I've ever written!:twilightsheepish:

:rainbowhuh: whhhhatttttt!!!!!!! first sad story! wow. Well done, and thanks for the watch :raritywink:

2896221 Your welcome! Oh and btw I LOVED your stories "A Heart Of Gold" and "Supernaturals"! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks :rainbowkiss: im writing another one shot, my first sad one to :pinkiehappy:

Great strory you got me soo close to crying :pinkiesad2: if I re red this story I will most likely cry though....anyway great wrighting!

Thanks, gonna publish it soon :rainbowkiss:

Personally I think this is much better in my own opinion if you think about how it is all about losing those closest to yourself, but I like your choice as well.

2896634 holy shit you are right. You have out-song-posted me! :D

Right in the feels...:fluttercry:


It's scary how close that song comes to this story while still being original...

Damn. I must be a stone hearted bastard. Not even close to being close to crying.

Damn, Why so many feels?! I am almost in tears... Wonderful writing! :pinkiehappy:

28993662896355 Thx for the complement you guys! :twilightblush:

But I must keep trying to get lots of people in tears!

I cant type because my eyes are very blurry! Im glad I am home alone because I am crying right now..
RIP Twilight :pinkiesad2: :fluttercry:

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Good job...(sob)

2910074 Aww thank you so much!

So many feels :fluttercry: Poor Twilight.
Great story! :twilightsmile:

2957473 thank you very much! :twilightsmile:

I don't get it. I am not crying.

3227426 Aww! Thank you! (I must be slightly good at writing sad one shot stories)

While I didn't cry, I will say that this certainly pained my heart to read.

Why I didn't cry? Blame my male pride.

3236662 Shame on you male pride! Let the guy cry!
(And that was one of my hillarious statements for the day.:pinkiesmile:)

3237272 ... Nah, he says it ain't gonna happen for anything, 'cept anime.

3240303 And now I live up to my username!



P.S.S I saw what yo did with Jay Feather.

3293134 . . . Did I mention that this was my first try at writing a sad story?:twilightsheepish:

Screw manly pride! (I am very sorry to all men who take offence in that sentence. :yay:)

Jay Feather. Trollolo!:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::moustache::trollestia::moustache:

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