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When news of pony disappearances reaches Canterlot, Princess Celestia implores the girls to travel to the neighboring country of Saddellia, a kingdom of earth ponies ruled by a brutish king. Eagerly accepting this mission, they make the journey and, along the way, meet and save the crown prince of Saddellia, Prince Linden.

Things become difficult when the young heir becomes smitten with Rainbow Dash and royal trickery traps the two in a marriage betrothal. As the pegasus struggles with her growing feelings for Linden, she and her friends quickly learn that there are dark secrets being kept in Saddellia and they all must tread carefully if they are ever to go home again.

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YAY!!! It's HERE! It's HERE, It's HERE, It's HERE!!! One of my all-time favorite stories EVER!!! And it's been updated! HOORAY!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

And things have gotten moving!!! The twists with Bright Song and Nightfire? Brilliant! Didn't see them coming. And huzzah, things are FINALLY getting out in the open! The tension, the drama ... it seems like we're nearing a conclusion and I cannot wait!

This is so awesome! Thanks for finally posting your story on FimFiction! :heart::heart::heart:

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! maybe i can do a better cover picture. give me linden's colors?

This story is finally on fimfiction?

OhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygosh Hell yes!!!

It's here! Woot!

Gonna reread it when I get a chance.

Oh wow, Been a while since I have seen this story. And an update as well!


I wonder if the girls are going to pull off what they did during that big brawl during the Changeling invasion though. It's canon that they can fight their way through a small army on their own after all.

Imagine my surprise when I see this up here on FIMFiction. And may I say...

WHAT A TWEEEEEEESSSSTTTTTT:twistnerd:

Keep it up! I CANNOT WAIT for more of this story!

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Aww, you don't like my sketch? You want to draw art for my story? Yay!

Linden's colors, I believe, are blue. I describe his friends pretty well but realized I don't mention very often what he looks like. He definitely has blue eyes and I think I called his coat color blue in the story. He's a deeper shade than dashie though. Mane and tail? I'd say gold maybe.

Glad you like the story!

2890934 thank you!!! so he has a wonderbolt color scheme? that's awesome!! you should mention that in the story at one point

OMG you posted Betrothed and Betrayed, yaaaaaaaay! :yay:
This is my favourite MLP fanfic ever; I've been loving it on FF.Net, and now I hope the FIMFiction users will love this story too. :twilightsmile:
By the way, I'm 'Miss Pookie Fethers' on Fanfiction. :pinkiesmile:

2890934 Haha whoops, I've pictured Linden completely differently to how you imagined him. :twilightsheepish: I see him with a brown coat and black mane.

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Hmm, maybe that's why I didn't get too descriptive with Linden, as opposed to his friends. This let everybrony imagine him how they like him best.

2891382 *is vinyl beat on FF.net * been awhile. i hope to see more soon!! can't wait for more!

How could Rainbow friends minupulate her and the prince like that?

:rainbowlaugh: the king is pretty funny, in a scary way

There was something odd, yet strangely familiar about her speaking voice, an accent Rarity couldn’t quite place. She glanced surreptitiously at the mare’s flank, hoping her cutie mark might give her some clue, but the two entwined thistles didn’t spark any memories she could recall.

Thistle Whistle?

Edit: damn I was close though :(

Shits about to get real :rainbowdetermined2:

YES! This is finally on FIMFiction!

CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS MILLITARY BUNNY SITTERS!!!
YAY!:yay:

“Pony pile!” Applejack whooped and jumped into the fray.

:ajbemused::facehoof:

Excellent.

Comment posted by LeopardCay deleted Jul 19th, 2013
Comment posted by LeopardCay deleted Jul 19th, 2013

For some reason I want them all to dance along to

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Not sure why.....

I remember reading the first three chapters a few months ago on Fanfiction, and for whatever reason I had decided not to continue. Now that I've read it again though, I can't get enough of it! :twilightsmile:

More! More! MORE!! :flutterrage:

okay i am really enjoying this, i am kinda worried about Fluttershy, I hope she is okay.
so i guess with Rarity and Fletcher getting cozy, that doesn't bode well for Spike?

oh please update this soon. i hope Luna or Celestia lead some troops into SAdellia

This is actually good :raritystarry:
:ajbemused:Ah want the whole dang army at mah doorstep, Pronto.
Applejack! I told you its gonna fix itself in the story! You dont need to call the Equestrian army!
:pinkiesmile:Yes she do-done-does!
Pinkie! Not you too!




Excuse for a minute ill be back in a chapeter or two..

“This is so cool! It’s like having my very own army—this is even better than playing Commander Hurricane.”

ALL HAIL OUR NEW FEARLESS LEADER RAINBOW DASH!

[“You know what? Me too.”

See? She do like him!

:ajbemused:Ah hate when you prove me wrong,

Mweheheheh... Victory is m-

:twilightsmile:Not so fast!

You've gotta be kidding me...

:twilightsmile:You forgot to ask the main pony in this situation.

:rainbowkiss:Yeah! Just because i like being around him and might just have liked to kiss him... Doesn't mean i love him!

Give me a break... JUST READ THE DAMN STORY!

:applejackunsure:Ah have to admit... This ia getting preatty darn exitin'!

Told you so.

:twilightoops:I am extreamly sorry for being such a... thick-skulled idiot:facehoof:

Aplogy accepted.

:rainbowwild:I dont really like the lovey-dovey-mushy stuff. ME? Being in LOVE? You really do run out of ideas.

Just sit there and be quiet.

And also, update please. I think we all wanna read more.

:eeyup:Eeyup!

:pinkiehappy:I SOOOOOOOOO love this story! *squee*

I couldn't agree more.

:rainbowwild:Like I would fall in love!

You might. You never know. And Twilight I hope you have a plan to help :fluttercry: :raritycry:

:twilightblush:Definitely.

Eternal shame upon those who dislike this story:flutterrage:
May you die slowly in horrible painful ways.....:pinkiecrazy:
WHO WANTS CUPCAKES????

Holy crap its here! Derp - clearly I missed the memo.

Summary of all my comments over on fanfiction.net:

This is awesome, you're awesome, and you should feel awesome! :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug: :rainbowkiss::raritystarry::yay::twilightsmile:

There, I think that covers it. Oh wait...

:moustache:

There. Consider yourself spammed with all the emotes I couldn't use before. :derpytongue2:

I was browsing over on ff.net when I suddenly thought to search and see if this fic was here, and whaddaya know! It is! TWICE THE AMAZINGNESS! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::flutterrage::raritystarry::twilightsmile::moustache::ajsmug:

THE SUSPENSE!!!

“Sleep tight, everyone,” she murmured.

Oh noes the forbidden word hath been uttered! TAKE COVER!!!

Erma that was meant for chapter two sorry ^_^

2895389 Lol how come I see you on almost all the fanfics I read? XD :rainbowlaugh:

3815742 :pinkiecrazy: shhhhhhh.......ignore me......

Is there a way to see stories related to this? I love this type of story (for some reason esp when RD is the one that is the one that receives the crush) and I am unable to wait for the next chapter - I feel like im gonna explode

Double space the paragraphs, PLEASE!

Please write more chapters! I've been waiting for many months. This is my favorite story!:applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

Please don't listen to any of the haters of your story. It is an amazing story and my absolute favorite on fimfiction. Bar none. Pleeeeeeeeeese write more!!:fluttershbad::fluttershysad::heart:

This is a lovely story please update it

Do you know what this fanfic is totally awesomeeeee!
It's one of my favourite now!
Pleaseeee upload more chapter.
I really cant wait to know how it will end :)
Thank you for sharing a great fiction like this.:heart::heart::rainbowkiss:


Ps. Sorry for my bad English.

What are Lindins official colors? I am adding color to the cover image, but I don't know his colors.
I always imagined him brown.

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