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Chelis


Writer/Admin/Title VII requirement for Horse News; humanized/equestria girls fanfic writer. Pardon my grit

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against my better judgement, I clicked this
Looking past the fact that this is a clopfic and an EQG spin off, I'm quite impressed
I'm not a big fan of the whole "Anon" deal but I do think this is well written and the back story behind the protagonist and Summer Song is just adorable

Good job

All i can think of is a modified fresh prince of bel-air prologue. Looking forward to more.

Hey guys need a bit of help: i was asleep (i live in the west coast of the US) and i was wondering since i woke up to ALL THIS AWSOME ACTIVITY: did my fic make the feature box?

It's like you relish writing controversial fics. :facehoof:

But when a small fight forces him to leave it all behind and move to a new town,

Hmmmm....that sounds vaguely familiar.:duck:

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Why was: THEY'RE TOO YOUNG!!!! the first thing to pop into my head?

Hmmm... this mite be all right.:trollestia:

Good story, fresh spin , so why the hate?:duck:

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*nods* I like it. A bit of heartwarming business, new characters added in... *nods* Good work

i love this story also why cant people enjoy a good story and always have to be a critic

if anon planning on ruining there harem then how?
Is it going to discreet or will it be noticed.
:moustache:

What the hell is this? A clop fic with no clop in one of its chapters. I am disappoint.

3416395 gez here we go again :facehoof: you cant just have sex after sex in every chapter just because it has mature and sex (clopfic) in it doesn't mean its 24/7 sex also its not even finished or its just started so give it a break will ya :flutterrage:

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I'll concede that there doesn't need to be clop in every chapter in favor of some character building, as our beloved author has done with this one. Especially if he is planning on making Anon be the bad guy in this fic.

I seriously am hoping that these first couple of chapters are only here to try and get the reader to like Anon better before he becomes super dick when he enters school and starts taking advantage of the young and impressionable Six.

I really will be disappointed in this fic if Flash Sentry is made to be some OOC duchebag.

With the description of the story you gave and this chapter, you are setting your character up so that we will end up seeing the main character as a giant douchebag,

3400104 Would you consider it racist if I hated everyone equally?

NTR....Cuckold is no go.

It's getting somewhat better

OH MY FUCKING GOD THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy:

are you going to put both principals in his heram????

Anon's either gonna get Twilight or one of the Principals in bed first. *places ten bits into a pot* Who wants to bet on it?

Wow, was that an asshole'n thing to do at the end. Was feeling neutral about him till the ending, now Anon is an ass. Also *tosses ten bits into the pot* I bet he totally gets the Principals first before Twilight.

I go for the principal 5 more bits said that he start imagine he is having sex with Sunset and his soldier can't stand up those the principal discover that punishment is a dick killer.

And then the hottest girls in school walked in the cafeteria were all the boys and lesbian grew raging boners!

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3483649 Hah! Good one. I was thinking the same thing.:ajsmug:

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how much you wanna bet its a pissed off celly.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH
HE HAD SEX WITH VICE PRINCIPAL LUNA

je so we have our first lesbian, well she can verify the authenticity of vaginal AND something tells me she is going to be the best wingman ever…I can see it, a win win situation, she can point him witch girls are up for a treasome and he can help her with insecure girls that are not clear on her orientation and could use a little push

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