EDIT: There is now a sequel! A Game With No End
Pinkie Pie knows it's coming.
It's going to end soon.
What then?
Please thumbs up if you like it, thumbs down if you don't. If it's one of your favorite stories you've read in a while, add it to your favorites. Comment if you have anything you'd like to say.
Basically, be honest with me, tell me what you think.
I will say though, please no being a jerk, okay? Just say what you think.
PS: If you're gonna favorite, could you also thumbs up? It's easier for me to measure how much people like the story, and it helps more people find it too.
I've now edited the story, changing a few bits and pieces here and there. I'm wondering if you guys would like me to write some more stories that take place in this universe. Please tell me what you think.
just wow
2885617 you like it?
...
ok, I'm speechless.
2886142 is it really that good? I only spent 34 minutes on this...
2886182
In a grammar and literal context I can't say nothing because I'm not motherlenguage english.
In a "idea" context, this version of Pinkie is good. very good.
2886209 thanks!
(Wow, there are a lot of people on this site who only know English as a second language...)
2886832
You are welcome
Likely, There are no site in our lenguage.
(p.s. I'm italian
)
2886963 Ah, that makes sense.
Absolutely wonderful!
2887833 thanks!
2887872 No problem, I really enjoyed it!
2885806 Yes I meant what i said in the best possible way
Interesting. Just to clarify, Pinkie Pie witnesses the death of the Universe and it's rebirth within days, weeks, years? Or is she immortal and lives from the begginning of time all the way to when the Suns die, Black holes collapse, and the universe freezes before collapsing into nothingness before rebirth?
I don't really get the time restrictions of the time loop,
2894712 she lives through everything. Everything. she is born along with the universe, she lives life over and over again, and dies along with the universe. Of course, the universe doesn't just end, it resets, and the outcome is never the same.
So I guess, something like the second thing you said.
2898550
Holly fsk. That is the most messed fridge horror I've heard about in a while. Kudos.
Although I feel that it was to short for a one shot. Like there was more that could happen, but for an introductory chapter it was good. You introduced all the main players [Time Turner, The Princesses [who aren't all that important], the Mane 6, Spike, and even more important a mysterious Big Bad that is doing all of this.].
It got my attention, but what now?
- She [Pinkie Pie] misses Time Turner and is sorry about their fight. It's clear that Time Turner is using Mares to fill the whole left by Pinkie Pie's leaving. Will they Reconcile? What was the fight about? Why was it so bad that they haven't spoken for X many Eons / Universal Centuries?
- She broke down in a major way, will Dash whose the element of loyalty figure out somethings wrong?
- Pinkie Pie needs to figure out what is happening and how to stop the Big Bad from doing what not? Or if it's not bad, why she's being used as she is.
ect. You have a good beginning, and in that way. It's good enough at drawing my attention to it, but what now? Do you leave it as it is and leave everything to your readers imagination, or do you fix up the loose ends? Is this going to have a sequel?
By the way. Good Story.
2900493 I dont really know... I might do a continuation i guess...
2901308
You had better do a continuation, or so help me Celestia I will end you.
seriously, this was fantastic!
2967044
Oh, stahp it you...
I might get back to this story if I finish one of the others that I'm working on right now, but I'm sort of grounded right now... You'll have to wait till maybe mid to late August for me to get back to any of the stories, let alone this one.
2900493
Hehe, the Big Bad. I think that if I do continue the story, and there is a force behind her condition, (since I'm not sure yet if there is,) then I will definitely refer to it as "The Big Bad."
I love this! The feels man, the feels. This is possibly the most beautiful fic on this site (or any site, for that matter) I have ever read. Simply poetic!
3585752
Oh god, do I officially have a legitimate fan?
You have no idea how good you just made me feel.
3586191 haha! No problem! This was actually one of the best (if not #1!) fics I have ever read! (I fangirled really hard when you replied to my comment,btw!)
Very nice!
I rather like the idea of Pinkie being an immortal of sorts. I also liked the mention of how the Doctor's companions are kind of like a coping mechanism for him. I need more fanfics centered around that idea.
All in all, I liked it! :)
3703121 lol, really? I had a similar feeling when I received your comment.
(you know, squealing like a little girl, that sort of thing).
It's not often people praise my work this highly.
I really want to get back to writing more fanfics, but I only have 30 minutes before school during which I can use the computers.
I might make this a series once I get back into the swing of things at school.
(I just started at a new school in the middle of multiple units, so yeah).
PS: I try to respond to any and all comments no matter what.
3830571
Thanks! I'm thinking up ideas for the next bit, so expect more eventually!
3869454
Cool, can't wait!
3870071
oh, btw, you've read the 2nd bit too, right?
3871307
I actually read the sequel first, heh heh.
3871727
lol, should've read the description first.
3875640
*gets all defensive* I did! I just didn't feel like searching for the original!
But seriously, I always read the description. Whether or not I remember them varies.
3875826
I put a link, dummy.
3964500
I know.
3966862
Then why didn't you follow it?
3969596
I didn't?
3970591
If you read the description before the story, why didn't you read the first one first?