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The Royal sisters ask Derpy and her Cousin Golden Harvest, to travel to the Crystal kingdom for their safety. Unaware of something lurking in the dark of the world; ready to take it revenge on those that trapped it so long ago. The duo now must to face their own trials and tribulations to realize their newly awakened powers. The new resurfaced Crystal Empire has its own problems to sort out; like a resurrected long dead prince, phantoms and family issues arise through it all. It friendship and brotherhood, when out? Or with the Shackles of this world make it all crumble under its burden?
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Reference to GOT?
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I'm not sure if Odyssey is the right word. It would have to be a long, transformative journey to merit the name.
Grammatically, this is highly disjointed, making it very difficult to read. If you need another editor, I'd be happy to help.
This is an excellent story, it has all the prerequisites for being extremely moving, and it's certainly an epic take on Sombra's past, and an unusual one.
I like that Aurora is like Futtershy. This caught my eye because I was drawing sketches a while back of all the Disney princesses as ponies, and... heh.
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Yes Please, You are offer is welcome addition to the group! lol nice you caught on to that... I'll fill you in notes later!
3223678 Cool, should I PM you?
3226579 Yeah! I'll fill you on the stuff there!
i have been lisning to the music for a while and i think of helping you right this story and i have great ides but i have not yet wrote any storys yet i have been think of and this sounds like a great story to right this story. how can i help you guy in righting this and keep the ideas going . i want to really know what your have done all ready ok pleace i know you guy and needing a littal help . im alex.
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So I didn't want to without reason to raise everyone hopes of the chapters had and lost, and went on working in silence then though of surprise you guys two chapter this week! I might be talking to someone/ my editors and proofreader about the chapters later on...
Yeah I'm Alive, just had to going over my first chapter and revise it since i lost my finished five chapters last year during Christmas!
So Now I'm trying to remake Chapters two through five I had blocked out week.
I will be following this story my good sir, and I wish thee luck for the writing of something great.