Fluttershy tried to move on from her own vicious behavior following Iron Will’s assertiveness seminar, but some of her friends have not been able to forget so easily.
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Since I despised putting your hoof down and that scene, this was very refreshing. Keep it up!
Thanks very much for reading and commenting!
It's really funny that you say that, because I'm actually writing this for the precise opposite reasons. I guess it can work both ways, though.
It seemed, that Fluttershy was slightly out of character. In a minor, but slightly noticeable way. That however, doesn't really matter, unless you want it to.
In reality, it seemed very intriguing of an idea, and it probably shocked a few of us when we read of how Fluttershy uses the thought of Pinkie Pie's parties being useless as a buffer to what others say about her. Also, it passed over myself and quite a few others that when Fluttershy had said that to the two, she actually may have meant it, but had never wanted to say it directly to them.
So, overall very nicely done.
"Truth is stranger than fiction, but it is because Fiction is obliged to stick to possibilities; Truth isn't."
- Mark Twain
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Really? I was more worried about Pinkie seeming out of character. In any case, I'm glad the story feels mostly believable. Also, thanks for reading and commenting!
I liked this, it was a nice insight onto Fluttershy's thoughts and her relationship with Pinkie. I'm worried about if/when Rarity manages to talk to Fluttershy about this, and all the over-the-top histrionics she might break out. Good work!
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You're right to be worried about Rarity, but don't get too distraught.
Loose end tying story, nice read and an interesting view of what is underneath statements.
Didn't see that one coming.
“I have sometimes thought that what you do is pointless, but I only felt that way when I was trying to make myself feel better about what I do.”
Making others happy is probably better than spoiling the wildlife rotten.
thank you! i was starting to wonder how people associate flutterbitch as discorded flutter shy and not the crazy pony that sent her friends running in tears
after reading it, i have to say, meh. it was alright, but notghing special. the chapters were to similar, and rarity losing her cool was OOC. look back at sister hooves social and even puuting your hoof down. she never really had an angry outburst, correct me if im wrong.
Poor Fluttershy and Pinkie...
At least things everypony's smiling again.
Rarity, you're such a joker.
I never thought that Fluttershy had rich parents. Not in a fanfic, anyway.
I wonder what New Fluttershy must've said to Applejack, Twilight, and Dashie.