By a fluke of fate, Rainbow Dash crash-lands in the classical era. Now she meets her hero, Commander Hurricane. Will she succumb to the wiles of the “Weather Warlord?” What lies in the center of the storm? What will it mean for Rainbow's relationship with Twilight?
Executive Editing Credits go to the awesome BitAcoustic
Art by yours truly!
This storyline is part of the Hole Hearted Universe in tone and spirit.
I feel that this story was false advertising. I was expecting Rainbow to bed Hurricane and change history resulting in pegasi domination. Instead we got generic TwiDash.
On the positive side, did like the characterization of Hurricane and Pansy.
2865547 I liked this story. The romantic false lead puts Rainbow's relationship in perspective. Changing history wouldn't be possible cus then Equestria wouldn't exist. Sorta a feedback loop.
Unfortunately the portrayal of the stigma homesexuals face in the military is also realistic.
Great read. I really love Twilight xRainbow Dash shipping storys, and this was awesome!
Not a Twidash fan but I enjoyed the story and that's all that matters to me so thanks
Anyone who ignores this is a silly silly person.
Nice story, have an upvote, and honestly, I was expecting it to go the other way :P
Nice job