THIS PROJECT IS NOW ON HOLD. I AM VERY BIZZY WITH A CYBERPUNK CO-WRITTEN FIC. AND MY SECOND STORY "HONOR" WICH WILL BE RELEASED ONCE I GOT ALL THE CHAPTERS DONE. SORRY EVERYBODY :(
Isaac is a mess. He is in deep debt. Ellie left him. The markers are still pestering his mind.
It all starts as he goes on what was supposed to be a standard maintenance mission. but everything changes when Isaac's supposed to be partner messes up.
How will the psychotic necromorph slaying machine named Isaac Clarke hold his ground when he awakes in a land home of pastel ponies?
Chapters (3)
Well I am excited for more also I'm no grammar Nazi but you should go back and fix a few things, things such as capitalizations and other stuff.
This was okay. The dialogue was kinda shaky, and there was a little "lavender unicorn syndrome."
Or, rather, in the case, "cyan pegasus syndrome."
The worst part was the grammar; I felt like it really detracted from what was otherwise a fairly solid piece.
2862846 i would not be offended at all! i myself am dutch, so english isn't my native language. and well, any help in improving my story is welcome :)
2862828 will do :) thanks for commenting
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Awesome! I always feel like I'm intruding when I ask that question...
Anyway, it's about 5am here, so I'm gonna hold off until I'm not curled up in bed with a good book. When the sun rises, though, I'll get right on it!
Oh, and I'm definitely excited to see where this story goes! Can't wait!
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I'm good with it. The thing is I just haven't finished proofreading it yet. But go ahead, it would definitely make the task go faster! :D
dude i love this story
i am a big fan of dead space and i hope you will work on this more please?
2864762 i will work on it don't you worry! i am sending the next chapter to my proofreader/editer sometime tomorrow and after that it will be uploaded here!
cool dude good luck
A few simple grammar errors here and there, but the story aspect's solid. Please write more!
Your such a tease
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haha sorry about that
i'll get the rest of the chapter up in about.... maybe 3 hours? i don't even know o.0
anyway, thanks for reading!
Abandoned story
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not abandoned. just unable to upload for a while.
i''ll get the new chapter up today. sorry about all this :/
how it was a day ago i waited for a couple of months for this story bro and this story isint that bad its just the chapters are a bit rushed anyway its a good story really its better than the other deadspace fanfics i read hell deadspace is classic horror itsept 3 that one just remind me of godam resident evil and of the halos flood and why the hell when necromorphs start using guns seriously it pisses me off any please dont abandon this story has great portintual just try not to rush take your time everypony can wait
and p.s adam jhensen said i never ask for this
I hope that he changes back to a human personally
Why is Isaac so accepting of this when he should be pissed off because they turned him into a pony?