• Member Since 10th Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 28th, 2014

misterawesome


I don't read the stories on here. I don't like the stories on here. I just have this one story, South-Pony Collision. And all I have to say is, please read it.

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This story is not easy to summarize.
Look, I don't want to give out any further details about the plot other than this: it's the South Park kids-Cartman, Kyle, Stan, Kenny, and Butters who travel to Equestria. And everything else happens in Equestria. It doesn't get taken into the outside world. I just don't want to give out any more spoilers without you reading it. But I will tell you that this story is thrilling, hilarious, fun-reading, meaningful, controversial at points, unconventional for MLP:FIM fanfics, and motivational.
Also, I cannot emphasize this enough: read the author's notes at the beginning of the first chapter, please. Without it, you would be completely lost and all like "WTF" the entire story, stop reading early, and miss the entire point of it. It's that important, like you probably would want to take a screenshot or smartphone pic of it. If you're for whatever reason a non-brony, you should only really need to read the first part.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 28 )
Comment posted by Pop chatters deleted Sep 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by Spilt Ink deleted Sep 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by Jadedragon00 deleted Sep 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by misterawesome deleted Sep 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by ColoradoBlueJay deleted Sep 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by misterawesome deleted Sep 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by ColoradoBlueJay deleted Sep 2nd, 2013
Comment posted by midnight rose deleted Mar 29th, 2014

Dude what the hell happened to there fuckin tasers:flutterrage::flutterrage:

Comment posted by Antojo Pony deleted Apr 25th, 2014

I gotta say... I totally saw this coming. It makes complete sense that the boys could free discord with their chaotic interactions.

Damn, look at all those deleted comments...

4618658 Let me summarize

OP was faggot: A Haiku

The story was shit
Author was butthurt and deleted comments
Lulz were had

4618750 ...should I assume the wildly off syllabic structure was part of the joke?

4618658
I dunno. I if you want my guess, see- 4618750

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Author here.
Actually, only one of those comments was a hate comment-the one I deleted on April 24.
The comments I deleted on September 2nd were basically questions about the story asked by other people and my responses. I deleted them because I didn't feel like they weren't useful to other readers anymore.
The comment deleted on March 28th was done by somebody else. But I asked the guy about it and he told me it was a positive comment.

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Alright. Though it did take 11 days to reply.

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I come on here only every once in a while that's why

GODAMNITY DAMNIT.

I am fine with your views of hating the average brony, but you just made two of the biggest fanfiction sins. Not only did you write yourself into the story with being friends of the Mane Six, but you HAD to do the unforgivable.

“Oh and that white pony, Rarity-is my girlfriend.

You shipped yourself with one of the Mane Six. Yes, Rarity is my least favorite, but it's goddamn unforgivable. It's bad enough when you ship an OC with a Mane Six member, but it's gonna make me vomit that you shipped yourself with her. And I see this as your goddamn fantasy now, just as the title of the chapter suggests. It was good until this chapter where South Park met your face. That is where shit got jacked up, and you can now keep this to yourself.

I am sorry I have to scathe it, but it shall burn in hell.

And please don't hate me for hating your action here. You wrote it, I read it, and I need a big ol' bottle of brain bleach.

And a final note, stop making others waifus get all attracted to you. You're turning yourself into the equivalent of Flash Sentry for all the people who viewed Twilight as best Waifu. I have a REAL girlfriend, so you can go take your Pyroland rapping idea with ya to another place.

DO NOT MAKING WRITING YOUR OWN REALITY. MAKE IT SOMETHING CENTERED AROUND WHAT MAKES YOU HAPPY AND WHAT YOU WANT TO SHARE WITH THE WORLD, NOT WHAT YOU WANT TO BE IN RELATION TO THE WORLD.

Now you're being a dick to Spike and obviously hold a grudge against one of the better villains of MLP:FiM.

Again,

This is a completely idiotic self insert with the characters of south park and it doesn't even mesh well. The pacing is way, way, WAY off and shipping yourself with one of the main six just makes you seem like even more of a douchebag. You use way too many Deus Ex Machina and the reason for the boys wanting to go there is so benign.

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