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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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Equestrian Science Center Project #2010, Code Name: Sweetie Bot

Intended to be the perfect little sister to anyone that purchased it. Contains incredibly realistic flesh like armor.

Recently it has to come to my attention through the project engineers, that there is a glitch present in the prototype. The glitch caused Sweetie Bot to become self aware.

After checking the database I have discovered that said prototype was purchased by Magnum and Peral Belle, meaning the prototype's current whereabouts remain unknown.

I fear that if this Sweetie Bot prototype were to realize that she is actually a robot the emotional tramua might cause her to go on an uncontrollable rampage. And it could only be stopped by someone that it knows and trusts.

Project Superviser, X

This information was never intended to see the light of day but somehow has found its way into the hands of Rarity Belle, a young up and coming fashion star. Now she faces the difficult task of breaking the news to "Sweetie Belle".

But how will "Sweetie Belle" react to the news? And will this change the sibling relationship she has with Rarity?

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 36 )

Only minor complaint is that u keep using the word human.....but they are ponies lol......even the title has human in it......otherwise interesting concept

Comment posted by SuperPinkBrony12 deleted Jul 13th, 2013
Comment posted by SuperPinkBrony12 deleted Jul 13th, 2013

2866300 actually no human means human and anthro is a blend of pony and human so I believe ur the one who is wrong my friend ....this may be an anthro story and that's all fine but human and anthro are not the same.....

2866324 yep ur right my friend :) anthro is not human......equestria girls is human not anthro .....I still wouldn't call sweetie a human if the author is saying its anthro....just a minor nitpick

2866879>>2866324 It says "Human" now. There are you happy? :ajbemused:

I'm a little confused about how Friendship is Witchcraft fits into this. It seems to be in the same universe because events and situations are taken from it, but I'm not getting the feeling that Sweetie is the same. For instance her voice doesn't give such a robotic feeling and she doesn't use technological terminology on a regular basis.

2881869 It's a bit of a blending. It's not completly FiW or FiM. It's combining the two cannons in a way.

After all if this was entirely FiW Sweetie Bot/Belle would've been talking robot like the entire time.

You should double up some of the chapters. 1 and 2 could be 1, 3 and 4 could be 2, and 5 and 6 could be 3. Personally I prefer fewer, longer chapters, it's also more worth the wait.

2882265 Well I'm sticking to my writing style and if you don't like I suggest you leave. If you choose to stick around do so of your own free will.

In the description;

tramua

:raritycry:
Chapter length has the average of about 800-900 :raritydespair:

Comment posted by Copperpug deleted Nov 15th, 2013
Comment posted by Copperpug deleted Nov 15th, 2013

The story feels kinda rushed, especially with the short chapters, maybe you should consider extending the story out? Your choice of course, it is your story

3780370 I would if I could. I'm not sure how to expand it. Got any ideas?

4576357 Something that agrees with the reality of the show. For example, a fic where Pinkie Pie plans a party with Cheese Sandwich would be canon. A fic where Pinkie Pie is actually a changeling would not be, since she's not been shown to be a changeling in the show.

she swear she could remember a certain video game that Rarity hadn't been keen on letting her play. The game had featured a spikey black and red hedgehog, who had assumed at one point that he was an android, though she never made it far enough to find out if that was true.

:ajbemused: I can't decide whether to be impressed or scared now.

I like this... I wonder what lies ahead.

So humanized, but not EG. Got it.

odd, it's extremely unlikely Sweetie has never been damaged before in such a manner. Cat claws are sharp, but there are worse hazards that come up in everyday life...

wow, that series of logic definitely belies an immature mentality, at least that's accurate to her apparent age. Only question: implanted memories fake or what?

that's another hole: how did Rarity's parents not know about this?! I mean, WTF???

ok d to the a to the m to the n

i liked the story sure it could of been longer but doesn't stop me from enjoying it i give it a 10/10

Oh hey I didn't know you did an Anthro story, neat, I will have to give it a read here soon.

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But you must remember that Opel is no normal cat. Remember what she did in Stare master?

Was this fic written by Sonic the Hedgehog? It's moving forward at a breakneck speed and all of the chapters are tiny.

Okay so they're human... But also it's FiW. Got it.

The Mayor of Ponyville a.k.a Mayor Mare[ /i]

Unclosed italics tag.

Y to the A to the W to the N

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Personally, I’m just glad you know how to break a chapter. No matter how short, it’s not jarring

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