A pawful of years ago, there was a great war between Equestria, the land of the ponies, and the Griffon Empire, the land of the, well, Griffons. The war lasted for many a long year, and I fought bravely in many a gruesome battle. If you're looking for some sorta epic tale of how we won the war, you're not gonna find it. We lost; it's as simple as that. Life eventually gets back on it's talons and keeps going, but the memories always stay with you.
Notes
This is a bit of a Slice of Life tale mixed with some mild Adventure on the side. Since I can only have one of those tages I decided to mark it as Slice of Life.
Chapters (2)
Ooh, i like this. I wish for MOAR! XD
I.E. please write more! Great story you got going!
Liking this...
But remember the 5 senses. The smell of the wet field and mud, the mushiness between his feathers...
Finally, first-person allows you to access a character's thoughts easily. This should be taken advantage of more than currently.
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That was something I was contemplating, and now it's something I will be doing. I'm glad you've liked it so far!
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I knew I forgot something! Thanks for the tip, I'll be sure to go back and add in some more details and thoughts we're they are needed.
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