Tinker, a unicorn stallion living in Canterlot with his marefriend, the pegasus known as Slipstream, has just won two tickets to a week-long dream vacation on the far-away Poneighsian Island. However, after a horrific mid-air accident on the way there, their dream vacation turns into a nightmare.
could you perhaps have this on g-docs? Because the commenting/correcting system there's much better, and I can correct tiny errors myself.
2909945 It's now on Gdocs. link has been sent to your email.
2924205 Well, I can't really edit a text file; I was thinking you'd upload it to G-docs, put it as a document, and then share it with my email so I can edit it. It's a really simple process, even if it sounds a tad strange.
2924956 Right, sorry. I've never actually put anything on gdocs before. there should be another email in your inbox, and that one should be correct.
Nice work man.
I like where this is going.