• Member Since 28th Jan, 2012
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Lamia


sup, am a new ponyfic writernever really written anything before other than roleplaying which prolly countswell there's a bio for you

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I'll read you all a quick little something from recent times... Take a seat, little brony-slash-pegasis. Story time!

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Comments ( 13 )

That's pretty neat, the whole paragraph-order/disorder thing!:pinkiegasp:

Ring into volcan, are you referring to lord of the rings :3 cause I just watched that movie :trollestia::scootangel::trollestia:

This is so weird and cool. I read through it the first time and pretty much ended up "WTF is this plot?" It took me reading 233519's comment for me to finally get that it was written backwards because that is something that discord would totally do. I then go back to find an amusing little story and just when I start to get into it, Discord ends it with, "Well, that's it. What? You expected a Tolkien novel? Silly reader."

This whole story absolutely oozes Discord's personality and I find that wonderful. Kudos. :trollestia:

Discord being his usual self. I especially like how he didn't want to take over and change Ponyville again etc. as it would ruin the joke. Classic.

*pulls up a chair and gets snacks for story time*:pinkiehappy:

so are the paragraphs in reverse order?

Goozack...wayside school reference?

Seems like people are posting more "Intelligent Discord" stories. I megusta this one already, will track in future. I'll keep an eye out for this though :ajsmug:

Darn commentators. Ruined it for me. Now I know that the story is backwards! I wanted to figure that out myself!

Wow... I was about to launch into a literary criticism about how this story made absoloutley no sense... Then I read Vocbox's comment, and read it the right way. Now I gotta say, it's a cool story. Even if it is still just a tad confusing. :derpytongue2:

...What does it say about me that I didn't notice anything odd about the story until I got to the end-beginning?

It shows that there MAY be something wrong with you. or, this is not your type of story so you didnt really pay attention. no biggy:twilightblush:

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