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Born and raised in the city of Baltimare, Exie's life has been short of exciting. But as she reaches her teen years and high school she is no longer the "talk of the class", more like the "the blank flank loser". Without no one to turn to she lean back on one of her best friends, Thunderwing Nighingale and his younger brother Odysseus Nighingale for help and comfort. Can they help her find her true calling?
Exie's OC by: ImJustAnotherBrony
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Hello, kind pony-fan! Good day to you! Who am I? I'm The Green Lantern from The Writers League! I'm here to give you a hand with writing this story. I'll be giving you a run-through of your characterization, which, at a glance, looks good! Let's begin:
. Okay so, Exie, your main character, your rally point, your focus, and your driver. First, let me tell you this right now, just make sure you keep it in your mind: The character drives the plot, not the other way round. What I mean by that is that your main character, Exie, isn't just along for the ride; She's at the wheel. If you want something to happen, let her lead you towards that.
I'm going to give you a basic some advice, as I couldn't really find anything in this story that needed specific attention. Though I don't think you need much
I'm telling you that because of the countless stories that I've read that began good, but had the characters get dragged along by the plot. It didn't go well.
Also, make your characters react to things, not just ignore it.
That's all the advice I can really give you, since you don't need much help at all. Good job! Expect more advice from my friends!
~The Green Lantern The Writers League