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Barrobroadcaster


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Exie's boots were made for trotting. She's been everywhere with them; it's practically her trademark. They've been through a lot and are in need of a little maintenance one day and there's only one pony Exie would let touch them. But when they suddenly go missing, Exie begins to wonder if she should've entrusted the sacred shoes to anypony at all...

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Comment posted by Barrobroadcaster deleted Jul 18th, 2013
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Comment posted by ShadowBrony deleted Jul 19th, 2013

2900053 It's all right and I appreciate it. You know I'm sensitive and I can work on this. More to come soon... but not in this for a while. Gonna have to set this fic on the backburner for the time being since we have other goals in mind.:raritywink:

Interesting moment between Exie and Rarity. There's a bit of exposition, but I've yet to see much of a plot rise. At the very least I would hint at something bad happening, just for the sake of hooking your audience. It's not a necessary standard, but it helps. I hope to see more!

2900389 It's why I don't do one-shots.:facehoof:

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