This story is a sequel to Of Two Minds
Feeling worn down from cleaning up the leftovers from Discord's reign of chaos, the Mane 6 decide to take a short vacation to Manehatten. No sooner do they arrive, however, than they encounter an oversized ninja squirrel that leads them into an ambush set by Discord and a mysterious assistant. The girls awaken to find themselves fused into Multi-mental Occupancy pairs and forced to take part in a scavenger hunt in exchange for Discord reversing the process. The girls will have to work together like never before in order to succeed.
Chapters (7)
You had me at ''oversized ninja squirrel''.
This was actually a decent read, but if I may give a suggestion. Through the entirety of this chapter, you used the word "said" much too often. I would reccomend finding a series of alternatives to combat this issue.
Other than that, this was good, you get a thumbs up from me. Also...ninja squirrel.
Having read the entire story I would say that the premise is one of my personal favorite what if fantasy scenarios. Yes it's not the best most awesome story I've ever read but it is fun and pretty unique.
Ninja Squirrels?
Hyperactive Pinkie Pie in quiet, calm Fluttershy's mind?
Scavenger hunts?
Yeah, I liked it a lot...is it truly "incomplete"? If not, I'd love to see more!
Flutters and Pinkie sharing a body?
Oh boy.....I can only imagine what that'd be like.
Pinkie Sense and the Stare.
What a combo.
Lol!
That ending was gold.