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Mrchibivampire


I’m a cat loving viking from sweden, who enjoys mlp and everything that is typical for a classic nerd.

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Celestia have always had somepony to take care of.
first there was Luna, then Cadence and her latest Twilight Sparkle. But now when they are all grown up she can’t help but to feel both useless,lonely and old.
She knows that they will always love her and she will always love them, but one evening Celestia suffers from a nightmare and thus she begins to doubt whether her little ponies still want her around or not.
Her desire to have somepony to take care of slowly awakens a darker side of herself that she sealed away centuries ago.
In desperation she releases a criminal who once threatened to destroy Equestria. Celestia will stop at nothing to get her little ponies back, even at the cost of her own soul.

Crap. My original cover image won't upload. Link in the author's note.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

Looks pretty good so far, though I've noticed some errors at times. Do you have an editor? If not, I suggest you ask around for one. They can really help out when it comes to the little things.

Anyway, concerning the story: it seems like Celly's about to go off the deep end :trollestia:

2838397 Thanks for the feedback. I'm my own editor, it's the best way to learn.
Stay tuned for more :D

Wow! That is a brilliant story concept! I, in fact, enjoyed every second in reading the story and can't wait for Chapter 2. The part with Discord was hilarious and fine in my opinion. Also, I believe the monochrome pic fits the story's plot rather well considering 'Tia's dream.

2839243 Thanks for the kind words. I really appreciate it.
Chapter 2 should be up someday in the future, I wont make a deadline since I know I cant hold it.

2932934 The next chapter will explain that.
Glad you like the story so far.

this is great so far hope you update this soon

3029784 It's in the works.
I never want to abandon a story I have started on.

where is chapter 2? this story is so good i just really want to see what happens next. :fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

4677675 It's coming. I just have a lot of stuff going on right now.

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