The CMC are at it again! With a deadline to find their one true talent fastly approaching, desperate times call for desperate measures! But that doesnt always mean you should take advice from your older friends!
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I liked it, pretty cute.
LOL THAT ENDING
Heh, made me chuckle.
Gotta mention an obligatory *ehh* at sentence flow sometimes; movement from one place to another felt a tad choppy/abrupt.
But not bad. Upvote.
They didn't tell her that all her friends said that they drink alcohol to help them to relax? And Big Mac just trusts them? The CMC? Really?
Also I wonder if they could have stopped her by asking what they are doing "wrestling" every night. I don't know why Rainbow is always a Latina, and does spike give her a topless massage? Siblings, even step/adopted ones, doing that sounds weird. Rarity sits on Sweetie Belle?
I mean poor Sweetie Belle.
Just a couple of proofreader comments:
“Again! Nothing!” Sweetie whined. It was getting late, and
soonthey’d have to return to the farm soonAppleBloom
givesgave her an apologetic smile before leaving to join the others.Very good!
I kid you not, Officialy my favorite comedy story of all time.
Just...
YES!!!!!!!! HIGH QUANTITIES OF YES!!!!!!!
LOL! !! Oh Sweetie Belle!
keeps changing tense
Applejack is such a wonderful sister.
That's what I thought when I first read the ending but now I think
great story but I don't know what a hangover is so yeah
still a funny story though 
3555635 its when you get a reeeeeally bad headache after a night of drinking it kinda looks like this
3555642
Oh, Sweetie Belle.
Woah, woah, woah...... Woah.
wow, you took a children's cartoon and made it uncomfortably adult
this made me really uncomfortable, congratulations 
Cadence being Italian is plausible and the possibility of Twilight and Shining being part German is too. (Courtesy of Night Light's German name) The Apple siblings from someplace like Tennesse is a given, considering their accent. Rarity might as well be Canadian-born, educated in the UK. Finally, I don't know what the heck's with Pinkie Pie. But Rainbow Dash!? Why the heck would she be Latina!?
Can someone answer that!?
That's Fluttershy- or Flutterbat- they're hearing walkinf through the orchard at the end, isn't it? I mean, she did say she joins them for drinks sometimes afterall...
4715879 Most likely her attitude.
If I was Sweetie Belle, I would have used a flying tackle and said "You better listen, or else. It ain't wrestling. They are having sex, which is also the process of making babies. They get drunk, and fuck alright? When a mare loves a stallion or another mare, they ingage in sexual activity, which leads to sex, which may lead to a baby. So shut the fuck up, and listen. Question time! What are they actually doing when they are "wrestling"? AppleBloom be all like "they are in there havin' sex." Scootaloo be all like "Sweetie, how do you know that, and get the fuck off of me!" I be like "Rarity isn't that secretive when she is in her room *ahem* another pony.......BITCHES!!"
If we're talking Cutie Marks, I'd say Anthro, not Human. That's just me though.