A young boy was soon to be killed by his parents who accidentally gave birth to him.They were supposedly about to correct their mistake by killing him.
Your most common mistake is foregoing the space after any given punctuation mark. You should have a space after a period, comma, semi-colon, colon and closing quotation marks
As nukestar says, you really ought to have a space between a full stop and the next sentence, as well as after a comma. Other than that, great story. Have a favourite and a moustache.
*take off sun glasses like in an old cop show* good job celestia
THIS IS IN NEED OF AN EDITOR!!!!!
we got a DAWW moment alert code swiss cheese
excuse my french ,but holy shit i love this story
AWSOME SAUCE.
Your most common mistake is foregoing the space after any given punctuation mark. You should have a space after a period, comma, semi-colon, colon and closing quotation marks
As nukestar says, you really ought to have a space between a full stop and the next sentence, as well as after a comma. Other than that, great story. Have a favourite and a moustache.