A young boy was soon to be killed by his parents who accidentally gave birth to him.They were supposedly about to correct their mistake by killing him.
This is just splendid! All of you guys are liking this. I am shocked to see that even since this started off with a very rough start that it got this good. If only you guys would start commenting as well. That would be fantastic. They don't even have to have any criticism. I just like to hear from the audience.
Sadly, it isn't masamune. But then I wouldn't be here to reply since I would be at the end of the...er...eight yard dai katana, if it was.(dai meaning great, meaning to be held with two hands, it's japanese). I would have it pierced my heart, be decapitated, or be perfectly cut in two. Nor is it the buster sword, my fellow FF fan.
Cars in Equestria? Did you really mean to type that?
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Yes, this means as in train cars, separate parts of a train. I believe you had a dumb moment.
2848655 Ah I did indeed, thanks!
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No need to thank me. It's kinda what I do.
I hope to see much more comments in the future. Good writing and reading to you all who didn't immediately click the dislike button.
This is just splendid! All of you guys are liking this. I am shocked to see that even since this started off with a very rough start that it got this good. If only you guys would start commenting as well. That would be fantastic. They don't even have to have any criticism. I just like to hear from the audience.
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Sadly, it isn't masamune. But then I wouldn't be here to reply since I would be at the end of the...er...eight yard dai katana, if it was.(dai meaning great, meaning to be held with two hands, it's japanese). I would have it pierced my heart, be decapitated, or be perfectly cut in two. Nor is it the buster sword, my fellow FF fan.
While I won't unfave this, I feel I must give some criticism.
You have a decent storyline and the sequence of events is compelling, but you should REALLY flesh it out a bit more than you have.
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Thanks, any criticism is welcome as long as it isn't overly harsh.
2865059 I forgot to say that the prologue and ch1 are fine though.
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Thanks, I really wanted to make the reader imagine the hell this boy has lived through and to have a lot of sympathy for him.
P.S. My other story, Never Leave Me, has an alternate ending that will make you shed your manly tears.
2867908 Tears?
Please, those are for people with souls.
Granted, I do HAVE a soul...it's just not originally mine.
Red be my hair.
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Then black be your soul.
2870279 Maybe, but I won it in a game of dice, so it's not my fault if it's black.
2872315 Annnnnndddd...that's why life sucks...
2872492 Of course it sucks. If it didn't, Bronies wouldn' be the most hated fandom on the internet.
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Exactly why I remain to be a closet brony...nooooone shall know...oh wait...
2872596 Does your family know?
Mine doesn't.
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Currently only the fellow bronies here know...no one else....I plan to keep it that way.
2872623 Same here.
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I know my friends wouldn't take it good, well only one would stick by my side, but yea. Anyways, excuse me while I start writing a new chapter.
I cant wait to see what happens next