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Recently, life has not been fair to Twilight Sparkle. She's nearly gotten killed, and has been somewhat scarred for life. But as the saying goes, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Watch as Twilight endeavors to prove it. Witness the rise of Iron Mare.

Inspired by Iowaforever's Justice League of Equestria series. I bring you the first installment in a series I like to call Celestia's Avengers. Hope you enjoy it.

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Comments ( 12 )

Seen it done before, and Jarvis had the same name in that fic as well

Rest assured, I'm not going in the same direction as that.

I'm hoping Twilight and Night Survive this situation.

3284078 Sadly I think Only twilight will:fluttercry:, but one can hope.

Well its a bit rough, but that leaves a lot of room for improvement. There were a lot of things that seemed forced like Facet's relations to rarity and twi and sparkle industries. Having mentioned them earlier would have made a good set up. Like you did with the experiment at the very beginning where you mentioned Erskine, setting up captain equestria and the hulk from the experiment itself. That's a good long term planning process.

This is a pretty big project. There will be some rough spots along the way, but all will have their parts to play. Facet included. Though shipping him with Twilight... I'll admit that's a bit of wish fulfillment on my part. Facet is something of an author avatar.

3454879 I see. Maybe shouldn't have put yourself in such a major role, but that's whatever. The main thing to remember is to take your time.

I'll keep that in mind. Your critique is very much appreciated.

On the one hand. Poor Twilight. On the other hand.... WELCOME BACK LOBO!

So it begins.

Oooooo! Ponyvengers! Watching this 4 sure!:heart:

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