• Member Since 2nd Jun, 2013
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DragonHeart1224


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Its been 8 years since the Human-Covenant war ended. Humanity continues to rebuild after the war while looking for available planets to colonize. A young veteran and mute ODST that goes by the name "Rookie" due to his age compared to the rest of his squad is sent on a exploration mission on the UNSC Redemption when the ships AI goes under rampancy and sends the ship into uncharted space and the ships engines destroyed in the process.

The Redemption finds itself in orbit of an unidentified planet that is similar to Earth. They decide to scout the planet to see if they can see if it habitable or maybe even find help. what they find is completely unexpected.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 41 )

Seems quite interesting concept, looking forward to the following chapters.

well id have to say faceplant

i love the rookie and theta,
please continue.

2834867

Thank you for liking it I will im writing chapter 2 now

Comment posted by abdcdweawrbitwaihjtolwtj deleted Jul 7th, 2013

Capitalize after a full stop and you have a lot of grammatical mistakes, but I am going to overlook this and see if the plot is decent.

Like this story keep it up bro :moustache:

Rookie is the Best ODST and is better the Chief

please try to continue the epic adventures of the ODST rookie

3160229 I will school started back up so don't have much time

anything that is an mlp-halo crossover is always awesome. cant wait for halo 5:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

to the commando the chief is ALWAYS better than the rookie!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Your not a bad writer,the plot (giggity) is fantastic,but spelling and capitalization is not your forte. Get what I'm saying?

When will you post the next one?

3490830 No, Absolutely NOT! The rookie is better than the chief, and besides Spartans are OP anyway.

When are you going to post the new chapters?

Where is the next chapter? I WANT IT NOW! umm...........please.

Pretty good but it one not once that all that I saw wrong.

2840702 writing your better than me i fail all my spelling test plus you're typing this is going to be real great of a story to.

3937095 well he has school and maybe he making the chapters longer say 1000 words or more.

so much red vs blue

I knew it it was red vs blue

Ah... High school. I'm still in it. :moustache:

I'm starting my junior year this year.

Finished school this year. Planing to go to univercity. :moustache:

Good Story, please continue

Bumpy in the beginning. But, you are putting more effort into it! Congratz. You got me interested! :raritywink:

helllllllo anyone in there?

hellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooooo

What did you thought of the halo franchise killing rookie? :(

I think we can consider this story dead by now.

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