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"The mischievous Princess of the Night had nothing to worry about. Her plan was already in motion.

She definitely had nothing to worry about.

Definitely.

It was harmless.

No love potions, no magical artifacts. All that she did was convincing 'Tia to invite Twilight to a study session and take a free week while Luna herself took care of court so they could get time for themselves! Then everything will flow on its own! She even had Passion's approval, and the Princess of Love, Mi Amore Cadenza herself originally had the idea!

So why did she have this terrible feeling that something was going to go horribly wrong again?"


Yep, this is a "TwiLestia". There are some characters from my other fics (one that I temporally unpublished), but the sidestory mainly is of "Spark: Book One". It's not very necessary to have read this fic, but if you did it will help me and would clear up some questions that may come up for some OCs (which aren't that many).
OCs so far: Golden Passion and Silver Quill (has a brief appearance).
Cover art and any illustration here were and will be drawn by me.
Rated Teen just in case.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 34 )

I'll take ten thousand more units. How long until I can expect my order to be filled?

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Soon enough :duck::trollestia:
Thanks for the comment!:twilightsheepish:

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Yes... Golden Passion.
I'm sorry. I did specify this fic was a sidestory and would contain OC's, but I didn't specify who.
I'll fix that.
Any questions about her?

You don't need the sex tag if it's only going to be references. maybe bump it up to teen but Only add the sex tag if your actually going to show nudity or the act itself. otherwise your scaring away readers and blocking your story needlessly.:ajbemused:

anyway Good chapter:twilightsmile:

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Thanks for telling me. I'm just very paranoid that, if I miss an important tag, people may start hating on the fic.... :twilightoops:
I'll fix that.

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Well... This is her. (Drawn by me)
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I did not add a direct description of her in this fic because she already has her own story. The link was also in the description.

2976357 your welcome, I mean It only would be needed if it were say borderline porn but Just off hand tales and such are nothing to cry about, also If you can say it around your friends without embarrassment then It really doesn't need the tag, If you can say it around your mom without embarrassment then in my opinion anyway it should be rated Everyone.:twilightsmile:

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That's what I was telling her this afternoon, I'm happy reading another good samaritan saying that :pinkiesmile:

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I don't know if I've told you this: I love how you draw :pinkiehappy:

2977393
Sorry... xD I told you I'm paranoid!
And yes. You've told me a thousand times. And of those thousand times I've thanked you all of them! :twilightblush:

You make me blush.

Some people need at least leave their constructive criticisms if they dislike; really, is so hard not helping it or only is just Criticism? (Critic for critic without helping it?) But well, some people really need to change :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

Awesome. Keep it up. Nice cliffhanger to. I have no idea if anyone is hurt physically or emotionally and as a reader that makes me think. Keep up the good work.

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Thanks for the comment:pinkiehappy:! I'm glad you liked the chapter! New one will be up today in a few hours.:unsuresweetie::trollestia:

Edit: Not really.

Yea nice Cliffhanger:flutterrage: this whol experiment remeinds me a lot of Composure, I must say its an interesting take on.

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Actually, the idea of having an experiment was inspired by "Composure". On what the experiment would consist of is something I came up with myself... and the consequences as well, and the "error".

Composure is really the best Twilestia I could have ever read... :raritycry: I can't wait for the last chapter!

Anyway, new chapter has been published just a moment ago. Hope you enjoy it. :twilightsmile:

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Yes Composure is literlary one of the Best Twilestia fics I've ever had the honor to read. :heart::heart:

So and now too your story, congrats with this chaper I proudly can give you a thumbs up, maybe with more chapters like this you will be able to earn a Fav. But there is still not enough depth in this story how I had hoped, nevertheless it's not finished so I won't complain about that again until then.:twilightblush:

Oh and yes I enjoy reading it.

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Thank you! Comments like yours motivate me to keep going! And... they also make me think...
Yep, there are still a lot of dots to connect: The gender bending potion, Fleur, the night guard, the mysterious mare of the castle... but I still feel like there's something missing. Thank you once again and I'll be working harder to get that fave... :twilightsmile::ajsmug::yay::trixieshiftright::pinkiecrazy:

Bacon?! I can just hear the pigs. "They're eating him! Then they're going to eat me! OH MY GOOOOOOOD!"

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Explosions don't last weeks...
Neither do "gods" when dealing with time-related issues...:twilightsheepish:

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I'm glad you like it! :twilightsmile:
Which game would you like her to play by the way?

Pokemon. Definitely Pokemon. I want her screaming F$@K YOU ONYX! By the end:rainbowlaugh:it would please me:pinkiehappy:

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I know that feel... Alright, I'll see what to do...:trollestia:

I hate you. These cliffhangers........ why? Why do you do this to me? I just want to keep reading! :twilightblush:

I like the premise, and characters you have built so far. And Passion has been filled out quite well, even after just this short chapter I can pretty firmly grasp her personality. I'm going to be a little nit-picky here, cause most authors say they want opinions. Most of the chapter reads very smoothly, but there are one or two kinks. I would split the paragraph where the servant arrives with cookies in two, and recheck your punctuation for when the ponies are speaking. But I admit both those are more artistic differences then actual problems. To be honest though, I loved every minute of it. Keep up the good stuff.:scootangel:

I am really enjoying this story and I really hope you continue it

Luna got them backwards! Earlier, she said Sun Rays was the researcher and Lavender was the warrior.

That last moment: Oh shit..

😂😂

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