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Ninestempest
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close to tears but, nope, not gonna happen. good story.
I was hoping for fluttershy to love her back...
Her answer broke me completely, this was a sad ending mroe than a happy one in my opinion :(
Good writing sans for a couple of weird spelling errors and typos and obvious mind-clusters.
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Yeah, those were impossible to avoid for some reason, as I couldnt' italic anything, and saving removed a lot of my editing. Oh well.
"I've you done something"? What is that supposed to mean?
I notice that the story is marked as incomplete. Are you planing to add more to it?
you show rainbowdash's loyalty to her friends well and good start
this story is heart touching and makes me cry manly tears for what happend right in the story
so that is what happend with dash and sky but what happend after
how surprising this story is whjat happend to sky and trixie helping fluttershy
this story is good but what happend to trixie and was thier some thing with twilight and trixie
I liked it we need more the last words in this made me cry
4 hours have passed since I've finished reading this fic, I must say, that it was amazing, but the ending...
It didn't made me cry, I wont lie. But, I must admit though, that since I've finished reading it, a little voice in my head was saying "why fluttershy, why..." That means that your story reached my very heart, and though I feel upset about the ending, it was very touching. I would love to read another story from you, with a happier ending
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Happier ending... well, good luck finding that!
This fic kinda confused me... switching from Fluttershy to Rainbow Dash was kinda wierd... but a good fic nonetheless, but I thought there was something in the fic about Fluttershy asking Rainbow if she loved.. nevermind... anyway somewhat a sad fic... Stupid brain not letting me write corretgly right now tho...
Le me:
Y U NO LOVE
Le author:
uh... Ch. 2 outa 6?
Le me:
What is happening? Is Rainbow Dash alive? Did Trixie successfully teleport us to Ponyville?
This and more in the next episode of E.T.!
KEEP. IT. UP!!! PLEASE!!! I'M HAPPY AND SAD HERE!
this is so sweet... But it said incomplete. More coming soon? Shoo shoo be doo.
Yeah, I am going to admit it, You broke me :rarity cry: I was really shocked by how you played out the ending, and it actually made me angry a bit at my favorite pony (shy) and since your story is marked incomplete, I beg of you to continue. Even if it's down this path, you are a great writer and I really like this world you have made.
no i must not cry
dont cry damnit............................ 
god damn it
Ohhh that made me so sad......pinkiesad2:
But I do have to say it was really good and I loved Fluttershy's little oath at the end which gave me some thoughts about well her thoughts....
There was another story I read with a similar flashback for dash. I hope it turns out ok with sky.
Aw. Dammit why don't you love dash, fluttershy? I demand a sad tag.
It was a good story. Not terribly sad, but touching. I'd have liked a different ending, honestly, but it worked well enough.
Switching the POV at the end would have gone over better if you had an introductory or breaking sentence to explain that Dash was thinking and not Fluttershy. It wasn't hard to piece together, but it would have gone better nonetheless.
Oh my.
Why have I not read this yet...?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Heh...
Nice backstory for Fluttershy...
Believable too...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Pft...
Sky Swallower... I'm sorry, but that name...
Anyway... So far I'm liking what I see.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Huh... Nice touch with the plant.
Also a very good explanation of Rainbow's Loyalty.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Heh, nice twist.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Started with a FlutterDash story...
Ends with a Trixie redemption story.
Still, this was pretty good.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Is my english really that bad? .-. there are some parts that i think sounds weird, but then again :/, im not sure if is because it is wrong or because my english really sucks
those are some of the lines I think sounds weird, if there is nothing wrong with those lines then i'll know that my english is even worse than i thought, if not then maybe you should fix it or something, out of that, this story is interesting :3, now to the next chapter /)
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When I wrote this I was pretty bad at both grammar and editing. The last two lines have errors, though the first one is just using a saying (over take).
arrgh this story just keeps jumping all over the place in everything. Also the double random tragic completely non-canon in anyway backstories.
Actually what finally got me was the lightning bolt ripping the wing off of a pegasus. That's when I quit.
3838220 I remember reading the first chapter but i guess i just forgot about this in my endless sea of favourites, glad i found it again though!
Oh and HI LURKEY!
3841351 no your english is pretty solid, those lines are strange
3838264 pfft someones dirty minded
This was beautiful.
Kind of heartbreaking, but it was nice to see a story where the love is one-sided.
Though... Saying she does not love RD was a little harsh.
She obviously does, just not romantically. I would hope. O.o
Great story
Almost cried...........
Unless this is an AU, doesn't Fluttershy's backstory contradict her statement in Episode One where she says she's never met a baby dragon before?
Frequence of Dash's accidents in the show: Nearly none.
Frequence of Dash's accidents in fanfiction: Every 30 seconds.
Wow. I feel like I was just slapped and stepped on. And I actually feel pretty angry.
Well played, mother fucker
5952123 I felt the exact same way, but I do admire how it wasn't completely sad in the end.
Yay 100th up vote! And I'm pissed at you for the ending... Great story!
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So true lol
LOVING it so far
OMG…I love teh kissing parts
I wnat to know what happened
OH SHIT…this is AMAZING
OH SHIT…I'm crying this is so beautiful
OMG…Trixie saved the day