I'm perfectly normal. Who told you I was crazy? Not me. Cuz I'm totally not, ya hear? I'M NOT!!! Oh, and I write stuff, which you should check out. ... ...you all made me this way... ...
The Everfree Forest is known for its chaotic nature and boundless shadow. Very few creatures can live there and remain sane, but when one who has asks another who might to spend a night under its boughs, a deeper story is found in the light of the darkness. Pinkie Pie spends a night at Zecora's cottage, but she isn't as alone as her friends believe.
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Wow, nice little tall you got here! Are you planning on adding more? Cause if you wrote more, I would totally read it.
You should probably write more.
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Aaw, look how excited you got filly Derpy.
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This was pretty good.
The way how you've switched styles from Changes in Perspective is really something to behold.
2824117 Well, I'm always trying new things. I've tried simple 3rd person, I'm writing simple 1st person narrative over at The Mother City, and a more structured 1st person in The Best Songs, and wanted to try a more complex 3rd person too. Next would be 2rd person, when I loose my mind. It was a fun experiment, and I plan on coming back to it, but with all my current projects (three collabs. I dont know what happened to cutting back) I'll have to wait a bit.
Not bad as far as plot, however I did find some spelling and grammatical errors it wouldn't hurt to fix. Mainly watch how long you hold the shift key. Never start a sentence with the word 'and' as well. Those were the major things. Still an upvote from me though, keep up the good and improve the bad.
The vision shall rise.
2873933 I see your point and raise you another one-shot! The Person in the Mirror
I went back and looked into the errors you pointed out, and fixed many things I found. Thank you for the tips and soz for the late reply!
The Sear shall be Quick [..?..]
Is this like an alternate intro to silent ponyville, or dose it have nothing to do with it, and i'm merely making ludicrous connections.