• Member Since 1st Apr, 2013
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Bungus


Just a brony, writing and reading stories, struggling with an alter ego, and trying to be as sarcastic and witty as I can on this site.

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After a group of humans are brought to Equestria, they stop a changeling invasion in its tracks. With their amazing magic abilities they are feared throughout the empire, by both enemies of and the ponies in Equestria, and locked away in stone prisons. When they are reanimated, rumors spread about a Spell-Breaker in their ranks. When these rumors reach certain ears, they suddenly start being brutally tortured and killed, the memories of them wiped from the ponies and their powers stored in secret. But why you ask for such brutal measures to find this human. Because whoever controls the Spell-Breaker, has the power to control the future of Equestria.


And he just doesn't know it yet.



(Alright guys this is my first attempt at a story, so be harsh. Harsh as in constructive criticism way, not a D-baggy, troll sputtering the word faggot like machine gun.)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Hey guess please give me any suggestions to help along in my story.

I saw this and wanted to read it really badly, but it just disappeared!:fluttercry: Then I found that you made a story, decided to give it a look, AND HERE IT IS! I'm gonna start reading right now!:pinkiehappy:

:rainbowderp:

"Am I really a bitch?"

Me: "WAT DA BUCK YOU THINK!? YOU JUST HAD SOMEPONY EXECUTED MORTAL COMBAT STYLE!":facehoof:

Chrysalis: What's Mortal Combat?

Me: *FACEHOOF SO HARD*

On another note, I like it so far.

CHEESE IT!:facehoof:

I don't blame the guy!:rainbowlaugh:

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You know... I never said it was Chrysalis.

DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNNNNN!!!!!!

Great chapter! can't wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

My response to the author's note: No, keep the gun up! This guy's eating babies for crying out loud! (and apparently the idiot with the gun is a horrible shot)

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