The Story of Dark Star
bbonet98
Dark Star.
His uncle gave him that name before he passed away, bless his soul. He always wondered why the name was so important, why his uncle had named him.
What's in a name?
He joined the guard to protect his family. He was persistent and loyal, some say to a fault. It was just him and his family. No friends. Just his family and his name.
What's in a name?
Dark Star had many questions. After moving to a small town, he might just get them answered. But there is one question in particular he wants answered.
What's in a name?
Chapters (5)
Ah, I see you did like my edit lol
Friendly tip: Remove the title and author bit in the description, I just had it in the document because I'm OCD and have to have everything filed and labelled three times over. Also, take the 'edited' from chapter one out, right at the chapter name. Again, a note for me
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Yes now don't get a big head
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Me? A big head?
Do we really need to have this conversation, brandon?
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Ha big head
Shut up and diget no conversation I would just fall a sleep please
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What's up with the title? Dark Star was perfectly fine, why the long title that lacks grammar?
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It was accident I turf to change short description
Might want to change that, mate
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oh lol
good story so far.
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Thanks *sigh*
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I suggest looking at friend in equestrian there is a surprise at the new chapter
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For the story I actually give more credit to digit he is helping the most in the story with editing that he is doing and I'm rally glad he helped he is a good friend an I'm glad that he could help you should give more of the credit to him
Lots of potential. I look forward to seeing how this turns out
I'm happy about a new chapter. This has lots of potential. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Nice twist on how quick Pinkie got a party together. Thanks for a quick update.
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Amigo I got so mind blocked
4773090 What does that mean?
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It means I still have a writers block
4773119 Sorry about that. I hope it clears up. I know that is may not for a while, just keep trying.
And so the story end with darkstar having a heart attack.
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Best ending ten out of ten!
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yay! Cant wait for next chapter
Wow. What's that about. Nice part adding the dream and deflating Rainbow's ego with her obvious name.
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You will find out later in the story muhahahahahah*cough slash choking* Gaaahhh fuck
4778151 Careful. Don't choke on all that hot air. Good luck with the next chapter.