72 hours.
5 masks.
1 moon.
Precedes To the Moon and Back Again.
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..... Interesting
Y'know who's the dick who disliked this? They didn't even say why they disliked it. And if anybody was wondering this was a "Majora's mask" fic, that's why it also caught my attention.
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Indeed....
Okay, time to look into this sucker.
We all know when someone does a crossover fic, the opinions are mainly bases off of the choice of crossover, how they are incorporated, and the knowledge of the reviewer. To properly read this story, you need to know all of Majora's Mask. Now the plot of this fic is pretty much about Rainbow Dash saving the world. BUT! If you know how the game goes and the actions in this fic, it's different. Rainbow Dash's friends are all physically dead, the world has been brought to a wasteland, and Dash is nearing the end of the world. Imagine the emotional impact. All of those happy times, gone. So the ultimate battle against (MODERATED) begins. Now what I don't like about the plot is the story isn't really fleshed out, like, what happened at the cave and mountain, how did Dash find out the Elements of Harmony is pretty much the Fiecre watcha-ma-callit, and how is the world lit on fire if the moon hasn't crashed yet? A little bit more input on these questions would be very nice. Now what specifically like is the writing. More specifically, the attention to detail. The fight scene and the wasteland of Equestria. I just love the detail put into it, and I find quite hard to write a fight scene with no animation.
Over all this is a good story to read if you want some to quickly pass the time. The scenery detail is great, but the plot would need more detail. I think this would be a good 3/5 out of five.
Happy Fourth of July, Dashie.
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And thanks a lot. It really helps me out for future reference.
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Quite so.
2826145I pretty much agree with you on that. I was planning on having this fic be only the final battle with (MODERATED, I guess) which I knew would probably take away from the plot. I was sort of trying to be ambiguous with the plot and leave it up to the reader's imagination, but yeah, I definitely could have done it better. Also, I like the action's detail too, but I personally feel like it was too short. Next time, I'll try to have more of it. I think your rating was fair, and hey, it wasn't a 1/5. So I'm happy!
(Also, the town is on fire from riots. I always imagined that the Moon apocalypse in Majora's Mask would cause mass panic, people would start freaking out, and things like Ponyville's destruction would happen.)
2826853 Yeah, that fighting scene was a tad short, but it was just as long as the fight with Majora in the game with the Fierce Deity's Mask. So points for that.
2827853I wouldn't know. I'm waiting to play that masterpiece of a game until Nintendo makes Majora's Mask 3D.
2889258Thanks! Also, I'm really glad that you approved of my short fight scene. The story was supposed to be more about Rainbow battling her inner emotions than Rainbow fighting Skull Kid anyways.
Woah, this so epic, you should consider writing about the events that led to this, I'd definitely read it
3074705Hm...I could write a prologue at some point, I'm sure. That would be fun...
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Oh please think about doing something like that!
it's such an epic conclusion to currently a mystery, I got me wondering how it something could've caused this 
3076468Hm...have you ever played Majora's Mask? I haven't, but I think that, before I write a prologue to this, I would need to actually play that game.
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Oh is that what this is based on?
yea I've played it but I never finished it because I kinda sucked at it 
its worth playing, its pretty good 
3079581I'll play it once Nintendo finishes Majora's Mask 3D, which they inevitably will. And I'll try and let you know if I work on a prequel in the future too.
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I didn't even know they were remaking it and please do
3079643
i think you mean mane and tail
holly crap that was intense
by the way was town she was in Clock town or Ponyville or a combination of the two
when skull kid said "Canterlot Mines...Crystal Mountains...even the Apploosa Desert ." what about the fourth stage? the southern swamp, the northern mountains(drawing a blank on the name), the great bay, and the incas canyon
great story definitely going on the favorites list
3277110She was in ponyville. However, in this fanfiction, Ponyville acts as Clock Tower. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the favorite! Also, the sequel to this story just came out. You can read it if you're interested.
Wow, the fanfic was amazing, though is this mask from some movie or something? Or did you make the mask thing yourself?
3679520 This entire fanfiction is actually a crossover with The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask. It's a pretty famous video game, and the mask thing comes from it. I'm glad you liked my story!
(Merry Jinglemas)
You followed me too? You spoil me.
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It's no problem, also merry x-mas.
3685348 You too!
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Thanks!
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*Ikana Canyon.
3786186 I'll have to remember that one, it's the one that I always forget.
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
4678988 I have never considered that before...that would be really awesome! I'll check it out.