Warning!: This is my own take on how the events in Crysis went about. Don't say that it was supposed to be one way or another. I'll already know the events of Crysis. Warning!: There will be spoilers for Crysis 2 and 3. If you haven't played any of them yet, do so, they're great.
Alcatraz has, well, we don't really know what happened to him besides an impact into Equestria. You see, when Prophet took over the Nanosuit, Alcatraz lost control of his body, and everything about him. Now technically dead, the bio-soldier must find a new way to adapt to his surroundings.
Chapters (3)
The ultimate killing machine in equestria nothing bad could happen if the mane shit attack they will have there asses whooped!
then the suit adapts then supercharges it does that
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The suit always adapt.
Great chapter. Anything could happen, I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!
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Next chapter's about 660 words so far.
Twilight is especially stupid in this story
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Though I must agree with you at some point, I must say that attacking a bunch of little girls' dreams' ponies would be a bit... hmmm, how do I say it? A bit of an asshole thing. Imho.
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Ha
Hmm, the loud sound of the hydra falling wasn't enough for them and especially Twilight to see that the thing carrying back her friend and actually doing the first thing she said, is friendly.
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2835602 You summed up my thoughts well.
2835720 Finally, someone who agrees with me
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Don't say that I'm wrong, the fact that he gets attacked instead is only because of the moronic and predictable behaviour the ponies, especially Twilight show.
They repeat the very same thing they did with Zecora, but this time there is no Applebloom to open their eyes.
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Well yes, it's quite rare when someone has the same opinion as you, if you are on the internet of course.
Here comes Twilight-FREAKIN'-Sparkle to ruin the day.
GAME OVER, Respawning in 10... 9... 8-
*SYSTEM CRASH*
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FUUUUUU-
Ponies don't attack. They hide.
Great now i have to wait.
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Yes, that they do.
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Ha ha!
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Don't be too sure about that...
i am liking how your writing Al, hes smart, probably not actually looking to start a fight. the pen and paper is a nice work around his muteness, along with the premade voices that the suit has.
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Perhaps Pinkie's new sense will make a comeback...
I had to find a way to get him to speak, so I made up the audio dumps as a way to get their attention. Again, this is not what is in-game, but what my own take on Crysis is. (Somewhat) I do try to stay within the game universe though, however, need to make some stuff of my own to use in the story. Thank you for liking the story though.
Oh come on, it just got interesting and then, end!
Anyways, it was a good chapter, only it was short and could use a lot more descriptive parts.
But the reactions in this chapter are in fact the ones I expected, you got them just right.
So, keep it up and write longer chapters!
[angry nerdy ranting]
Rah rah rah, Amazon's a desert these days, most of Alcys organs've been turned to mush (he's p. much mush, nervous system and eyes) rah rah rah
[/angry nerdy ranting]
And here's how I feel about myself now
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But yeah, so far so good and going to keep an eye on this.
2835687 Not unless they attack him first.
Awesome!
2841813 love that pic, Dumb and Dumber is a great movie xD
This story moves forward like a train at full speed. And the train is stuffed with nothing going on inside of it.
What I'm saying is that you rush the story too much and almost nothing is happening, at least we never get to see much of it anyway. Like his arrival in Ponyville; you could make room for loads of stuff there. Sure, we've established that Alcatraz was taken captive but he is now no longer a captive. What happened between there? Suddenly he was just in Canterlot and made friends with everybody.
Alright, I have to say, this is great. There was only two Crysis stories before, I made one of them. Looks like we got a badass story over here. You should join the CRYSIS group, other than that, I'll enjoy the upcoming chapters.
No more chapters? This is a great story..
All the good stories
Any updates going to come around to this story?
2842449 provoking an attack, ALWAYS in fics like this, and for some reason this is like my story of Dead space, shit happens, the mc dies (maybe), ends up In Equestria, with the mane 6 getting a little hint
COME ON COME ON I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS OUT