No memory of her past, what she's done, or where she is, Twilight wakes up to find herself alone, imprisoned by the crumbling walls of the castle. All she remembers is her name, where she lives, and that something supernatural is after her. With no other options, Twilight is forced to travel deeper into the structure. Not a soul in sight, she begins her journey into the dark stone corridors. Soon though, she'll find she's not alone...
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OH....god....amnesia....so scary
Confound this darkness, it drives twilight to insanity.
My reaction to amnesia based fic: eeeeeh....hhehhhheh
Do I even want to know what the monsters look like?
Am... Amnesia!? Hell... this will be awesome, yet scary as sh*t at the same time.
236173 Oh, they're not so bad..
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What? They aren't so bad in the game. And if they are ponyfied: no hair/tail, other ear cut off, pale gray skin/no fur and mouth hanging open with blood dripping out of it.
I'm just excepting something like that.
Sorry for the late post. Had to do some stuff IRL.
Wow. This is a very good story. Plenty of detail and relevence to the game also. Kudos to you
Nice continuation anyway, you have a very good writing style and I would love to read more about this.
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Anyway, I'm trying to keep this based as much off the game as possible. Not very creative,
but I still thought it'd be an interesting idea to work off of. But, that aside, thanks for the feedback. 
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Thanks for the support guys.
I totally forgot about the shadow... Damn thing leaving acidic flesh piles everywhere... Then there's the bastard(s) with half a face...
You should probably take a look at the "lie" and "lay" verbs and their inflections in this and the first chapter. Other than that, I didn't notice any mistakes. Good work so far.
twilights note to self reminded me of upcoming episode "it's about time".
going around without a lantern is not the best idea.
253756 Will take a look at that.
254134 That's why I'm having Twilight use her horn. I can't really say any way for Twilight to use a lantern where it makes sense.
254434 Yeah, that was a problem with my previous story. I left to much of the character's personality out of the actual story. I will try to tune this in the next chapter.
256159 Thanks for the advice. Always appreciate anything that will help me become a better writer.
I'll definitely try this.
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Well done so far. I second the advice mentioned above. Remember to mix in her personality with her psych breaking over time, and be very descriptive when it gets severe. We want to be on the edge of our seats if (like in the game) twilight psych breaks so much, that she falls to the ground as one of those creatures begins to come around the corner. If you can harness these moments in the game into this fanfic, your readers won't be able to stop reading your fanfic (you already have my like and track, its just a matter of getting more people's attention).
ahah, so celestia = alexander. hmm. i wonder who appriga will be?
lookin forward 2 the next chapter. Cant wait.
458645 Yeah, I'll definitely try to get the next chapter up within the next two days. Sorry for the long hiatus on this story.
Sorry to say this, but I've got a lot of stuff going on right now. I haven't gotten an opportunity to write, so I'm putting this story "On Hiatus" until I do. Really sorry.
Aw, bummer
Oh well, I hope everything works out for u again. 