Go Away!

Written in a 30 Minute Challenge.

Rainbow tries to visit Twilight and finds the library locked up tight, what's going on?

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Kiue Jin

Kiue Jin #1 · Jul 1st, 2013 · 1 · ·

For 30 mins, this was surprisingly well written. Congratulations on a job well done.

Loeden

Loeden #2 · Jul 1st, 2013 · · ·

I liked it! Y'know, with all that sports gear she had on in the dragon episode, maybe Fluttershy is a secret fan too. Let's hope Cloudsdale never plays Canterlot or it might get dangerous to be around Ponyville for a while.

hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #3 · Jul 1st, 2013 · · ·

Great work! I've been meaning to try a timed challenge so this is quite inspiring :)

Willsons

Willsons #4 · Jul 1st, 2013 · · ·

Nice work for thirty minutes.

Tatsurou

Tatsurou #5 · Jul 2nd, 2013 · · ·

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Mental image of when that happens:
Rainbow mentions watching hoofball with Twilight to Fluttershy.
When the finals come up next time, Fluttershy mentions hearing that to Twilight, and asks if they can watch together. Everypony wants to join.
Twilight's in all her Canterlot fan gear. Everypony else is already there, no gear. Fluttershy shows up in her Cloudsdale fan gear.
Finals are Canterlot vs Cloudsdale.
Library explodes.

Shadow_Wolf