When Cinny published her first book, she hadn't expected it to be so popular or to find herself in the position of being herdmother to one of the ponies she wrote about. There are some sins a colourful hat just can't cover.
Oh my gosh this was so good. I think Cinny is going to be ok now, at least with the herd. Oh sure they're still going to be mad but I'm sure they'll forgive her eventually. Twilight Sparkle on the other hand is going to be furious when she finds out. I mean not only is the author of the book part of her fathers herd, but Cadence is publishing the book. So there's two good reasoons she can't sue Cinny's flank, or get any kind of revenge really.
Part of me can't help but notice that the lesbian scene gets about a third of a chapter and straight sex gets "and then they totally did it."
In any case, great chapter. Really, I think Star's reaction to the book is about the best one could hope for. Let's just hope her daughter has a similar reaction (which, in all likelihood, she won't.)
According to Ask Star Sparkle, Twilight eventually got over it, eventually just regarding the whole thing as silly... And ironically enough, Cinny is one of the few members of Lucent's herd she actually likes on a personal level. (Outside if Velvet and Lucent, of course)
Ah, Star... For all that intellect, ultimately she's controlled by her venalities.
And I presume that Star Sparkle is just a lot more experienced than Twilight in getting her magic working again after climaxing, or that Cinnamon spent some time working her through afterglow before settling her on the couch, since she's able to cast again that quickly.
I really liked Star's characterization, fits great with the how i picture her. I'm loving this story so far, and it's not the clop, just the way it presents the inner workings of a mature herd.
3282360 Well that's understandable, I mean it probably did as Cadance thought it would and made her think about relationships and all which led to her being with Lero and Rainbow. Once Twilight got past this incident, of course she'd like Cinny more than the others (after Lucent and Twilight as you said) the others aren't anywherenear as likable as Cinny. Heck I wouldn't be surprised if Cinny and Twilight had sex, except Cinny hates the idea of sex outside the herd.
3285204 Really? Cinny did say it was common in unicorns, oh I see, cause Star does it and it probably made the rest of the herd uncomfortable. That makes sense.
It's common amongst unicorn elite, which Twilight definitely does not regard herself as, and likely, even if she did, would still regard it with distaste. The way I see it is, that unicorns, as nobles, often enter into herds for political or social reasons, rather than love, (Crincle in herd Lucent is an example. Of course, this being herd Lucent, they turned it on its head: her barrenness made the political aspect pointless, and they love her anyways.). And as such, they often take lovers for love and companionship, and it's tolerated as long as it's discreet. I don't think that was a blanket statement of "all unicorns have sex outside of herds and everyone's cool with it".
3286698 Actually, Cinny's statement was meant to include all unicorns, not just the elite ones. This doesn't mean that every unicorn does it, of course, just that it's not the sort of thing other unicorns would frown on if they found out.
3286698 oh no, of course its not something all unicorns would do, and yes that explanation sounds logical. However that kind of implies that Star is dissatisfied with her sex life with Lucent. Of course she seems to be dissatisfied with most things, just kidding.
3288072 Star doesn't consider herself one of the unicorn elite either, nor is she in truth. The only high born ponies in the herd are Crincile and Lucent.
Oh my gosh this was so good. I think Cinny is going to be ok now, at least with the herd. Oh sure they're still going to be mad but I'm sure they'll forgive her eventually. Twilight Sparkle on the other hand is going to be furious when she finds out. I mean not only is the author of the book part of her fathers herd, but Cadence is publishing the book. So there's two good reasoons she can't sue Cinny's flank, or get any kind of revenge really.
Part of me can't help but notice that the lesbian scene gets about a third of a chapter and straight sex gets "and then they totally did it."
In any case, great chapter. Really, I think Star's reaction to the book is about the best one could hope for. Let's just hope her daughter has a similar reaction (which, in all likelihood, she won't.)
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According to Ask Star Sparkle, Twilight eventually got over it, eventually just regarding the whole thing as silly... And ironically enough, Cinny is one of the few members of Lucent's herd she actually likes on a personal level. (Outside if Velvet and Lucent, of course)
Ah, Star... For all that intellect, ultimately she's controlled by her venalities.
And I presume that Star Sparkle is just a lot more experienced than Twilight in getting her magic working again after climaxing, or that Cinnamon spent some time working her through afterglow before settling her on the couch, since she's able to cast again that quickly.
I really liked Star's characterization, fits great with the how i picture her. I'm loving this story so far, and it's not the clop, just the way it presents the inner workings of a mature herd.
3282360 Well that's understandable, I mean it probably did as Cadance thought it would and made her think about relationships and all which led to her being with Lero and Rainbow. Once Twilight got past this incident, of course she'd like Cinny more than the others (after Lucent and Twilight as you said) the others aren't anywherenear as likable as Cinny. Heck I wouldn't be surprised if Cinny and Twilight had sex, except Cinny hates the idea of sex outside the herd.
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Well, Twilight's not a fan of it, either.
3285204 Really? Cinny did say it was common in unicorns, oh I see, cause Star does it and it probably made the rest of the herd uncomfortable. That makes sense.
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It's common amongst unicorn elite, which Twilight definitely does not regard herself as, and likely, even if she did, would still regard it with distaste. The way I see it is, that unicorns, as nobles, often enter into herds for political or social reasons, rather than love, (Crincle in herd Lucent is an example. Of course, this being herd Lucent, they turned it on its head: her barrenness made the political aspect pointless, and they love her anyways.). And as such, they often take lovers for love and companionship, and it's tolerated as long as it's discreet. I don't think that was a blanket statement of "all unicorns have sex outside of herds and everyone's cool with it".
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Actually, Cinny's statement was meant to include all unicorns, not just the elite ones. This doesn't mean that every unicorn does it, of course, just that it's not the sort of thing other unicorns would frown on if they found out.
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Welcome, folks, to Equestria's racial stereotypes. >_>
3286698 oh no, of course its not something all unicorns would do, and yes that explanation sounds logical. However that kind of implies that Star is dissatisfied with her sex life with Lucent. Of course she seems to be dissatisfied with most things, just kidding.
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Star doesn't consider herself one of the unicorn elite either, nor is she in truth. The only high born ponies in the herd are Crincile and Lucent.
It really is difficult to see Star Sparkle as anything but a petty little tyrant.
At least for me, that is.
And so slinging it around worked... Make sense.
Aww, it was fun but I was bummed it wasnt a new chapter