Something goes wrong when Princess Celestia tries to send the Mane 6 to a special event, and they end up in the human dimension right in the living room of 3 bronies who seem to know everything about them. The three guys have these trinket things that let them go in between dimensions when they encounter REM sleep. The problem is, when they do that, the dimensions are intertwined and other ponies start leaking into the human dimension. (This is my first fan fic, but it will certainly not be my last. Constructive criticism is very much appreciated)
Chapters (10)
I'm going to track this for 2 reasons: 1. It sounds interesting
2. Princess Celestia messed up a spell. Usually it's Twilight who does that (Celly pulled a Twi.)
YEAH... something nuzzling against Your face...Hell Yeah, i hope its fluttershy
275048 heh...you'll find out in the next chapter. :P
Nice chapter, although you could have made them react to the eggs since they are strictly vegitarian
290036 damn...forgot about that...thx for noticing. i'll change that right away
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They do eat eggs, remember when Sweetie Belle made eggs to help Rarity?
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Well, i'll look into that.
it just seemed incorrect for a completely vegetarian diet.
lemme rewatch the episode. cause i think they were toast and orange juice.
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Not the burnt ones. When Rarity actually made it Sweetie constantly asking for help.
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oh...Well i was wrong, sry bout that.
i'll just give constructive criticism...
MOAR
ya know what's funny? this is my very first fanfic. I didn't know it would do so well!
Look...its derpy
443531 yes. i was finally able to fluidly get her in the story.
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....Awesome.
Finish it fagget.
Whatever you do don't show them smile hd
OMG ITS NIGHTMARE MOON RUN FOR IT
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Insulting writers is no way to get them to continue...
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Okay, retard.