Second person erotica, featuring Pinkie Pie! Pinkie is one of the best friends you could ask for. However, how will you handle her oblivious nature and hyperactive personality, as well as when she starts losing who she is?
I can't tell if it's just me, or if this fic is moving REALLY FAST. (i'm talking about chapter 1, haven't started chapter 2 yet)
I haven't seriously read fics in a while, i'm just getting back into the swing of things, but... I don't know, it just feels like everything happened so fast. We meet (anon in equestria?) the guy with no name, we're informed about his meeting with pinkie, and how he integrated himself, we get a glimpse into his everyday life with her, pinkie over-works herself and gets sick, and all of this happens in a few thousand words. Meh, either way, good story. I'll keep reading. Just try to keep mindful of the pacing.
…And so It begins.
Ah, misunderstandings and mixed messages…stories just wouldn't be the same without them.
4184892 It wouldn't be realistic if the two just went at it like rabbits...
And if PINKIE wasn't oblivious to things... she'd probably be a changeling. Just saying.
Hmmm.
Curious.
I'm liking what I see so far.
~Skeeter The Lurker
4187521 Pretty sure you didn't get Reaper's response since he responded on the main page whereas your comment was on Chapter 1, but...
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Good start. Onto chap 2!
4184932 You really missed this?
4188997 That upsets me, that I missed that... then again, considering the roll we were on at times in editing, maybe I shouldn't feel as bad!
... Nope, still feel bad.
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Dammit..........
4189023 Now you made Pinkie sad:
omg this story is so cute >3<
4196028 Glad you're liking it so far!
Well, I'm liking where this is going.
Definitely worth the wait.
Now, the second chapter!
Good Start.
I can't tell if it's just me, or if this fic is moving REALLY FAST. (i'm talking about chapter 1, haven't started chapter 2 yet)
I haven't seriously read fics in a while, i'm just getting back into the swing of things, but... I don't know, it just feels like everything happened so fast. We meet (anon in equestria?) the guy with no name, we're informed about his meeting with pinkie, and how he integrated himself, we get a glimpse into his everyday life with her, pinkie over-works herself and gets sick, and all of this happens in a few thousand words. Meh, either way, good story. I'll keep reading. Just try to keep mindful of the pacing.
O NO PINKIES SICK? NOOO DONT WORRY Ninja_Monkay is here
Well, rereading this because rereading I guess
How in the hell did this story slip pass my notice?
Rectifying that immediately!
Sometimes those who smile brightest hide the most pain.
Those who smile the brightest are in involved creepy memes. Tread carefully, young Pinky Pie.
-Blackmansta10
Your girlfriend's favorite DJ.