TD, the human that first showed up in Equestria in No, I am NOT a Brony, GET ME OUTTA EQUESTRIA!!! is depressed that he's stuck in the world of ponies with no way home, but finds solace in helping Cheerilee teach her class. However, Cheerilee is sick with the flu one week, and that just happens to be the week that a teaching supervisor comes to the small Ponyville classroom. From the very beginning she has doubts that TD is a person fit to teach the future generations of Equestria. Should TD fail to meet her standards, he will not be allowed to teach them anymore.
Non canon in the Non-Bronyverse
Chapters (2)
oh this look fun
*A whole new TD spin off.*
And here I was expecting just a bonus chapter, life is good.
So
Many
Spin-offs
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Yeees!
And to remain relevant, this was a good start, I am glad that it is incomplete.
Celestia's gonna crack down on this mess. fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/350/a/0/princess_celestia__the_solar_goddess_by_thelunauranwolf-d5o7j7n.png
Prepare thine selves.
That was kinda sad. She didn't give him a chance whatsoever because of personal bias, seemingly, I hope this gets updated soon!
Just an idea I had. What if their is a universe where a pony TD went to an Equesrtia girls universe.
As much as it pains me to say it, Thinking Brain brings up some, valid points.
Gah! I feel sick just typing that.
However there is still value in TD's teachings and I have no doubt he could earn that license. Further something about Ms. Brain's comments hint towards possible cultural biases, she mentions Equestrian history, but not global, she sees no value whatsoever in studying human culture. I wonder if she has problems with those who lecture on the history of the Buffalo, Griffins, Dragons, etc...
Not to mention she was being a total (expletive) about it!
Hooray! More TD!
...I don't like that mare, I think she a bigot. A big bigot! Which rhymes with wig spigot!
You show her who's 'not up to standard' TD!
A new spin off, hopefully TD raises some hell, fire and brimstone once again. Although.......... I'm hoping this doesn't distract away from Wanderings of a Non-Brony.....
2803316 No, the latest chapter is with my pre-reader now.
Finally I get to read something good that's not dark again.
"the Southern states saw what the north was doing as ignoring their rights as states."
Very politically correct today, aren't we? Still, I can see that teaching the values of democracy and liberty in front of a representative of an absolutist
monarchyduarchy in a position of power over TD wouldn't have been a very good idea, and neither would correcting her assumption that the war of Southern treason was humanity's deadliest war, considering how she already called us barbaric.2803334 I'm a history major. It's good to represent both sides of an issue. The southern states call the Civil War the "War of Northern Aggression." after all.
BTW, it's Diarchy."
But really, when has TD ever cared what the government has thought of him?
All of the good points Thinking Brain brought up were completely ruined by how utterly specist she sounded.
Why is it really common for humans in Equestria to just sit back and let their culture be insulted and barely noticing it? He could have probably thrown her out of the classroom for some of the stuff she said, and no one would be able to say he wasn't justified.
I'm not trying to influence your writing with this, this is just what I would have personally gone with. "So you don't care about anything outside of your own nation, and actively frown on anyone learning about non-Equestrian subjects, your society still uses steam, candles, and you rely on a crutch to get things done. My society has made breakthroughs you could hardly imagine, made weapons that could wipe Equestria and it's neighbors off the map and poison the land for decades to come, we have made the act of war an art form. And yet you have the nerve to stand her, insult my people, and call my home barbaric. I will get the certifications, but get the fuck out...Also, our sun is bigger."
2803422 Story ain't over yet.
All of my yes, and then some. If I didn't have my head
stuck up my assoccupied with video games and ponies, I would have read this the second it came out.Powell...
Last weekend, I climbed a mountain to stay in a hut called Powell hut. So, that happened.
Continue this story, and burn things. Many burns. Then punch said burnt things.
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Er, if your mentioning all that warfare stuff, that would make it sound barbaric, such as poisoning the land for decades to come..Yeah that's actually quite barbaric and would prove her point.
hmmm, 3000 word story in the feature box... knighty changed something.
I bet horsemeat would be an interesting change in TD's diet.
Okay maybe that's too far. But really, you did a great job of making Thinking Brain annoying
2803689 We've all met that snooty, uptight person in power.
That lady isn't very friendshippy...
MORE TEEEEEEEEEDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
2803695 Thinking Brain needs a Lunar Vacation...
I had this idea once. I called it Trading Places. It never got farther than 3 chapters, and they were pretty short, and not very well written. So I'm glad someone else is doing it better than me.
Nyeh, screw the government. TD can teach all he wants.
*blinks at Thinking Brain* Wow, what a flank-hole. Overall, I continue to enjoy your work, and I do hope you keep up the magnificent work.
Dear Thinking Brain,
This.
Love, BLTMunch
Thinking Brain wasn't thinking too hard when she made TD mad.
To quote Science.mov: Fuckin' biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitch!
TD better watch his teeth after how much he is going to be grinding them. That is about all you can do in a position like that.
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As much as a punch in the muzzle is desired, he'll just have to keep those fists in check and bide his time.
And being a human, a devious sneaky predator, he should go over that mare's head to the princesses via Twilight. Get himself a royal decree or some such writ to be allowed to teach foals.
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the feature box puts the stories with the most views per amount of time so when people flock to a story it gets put up there
2805402 I am aware of how the box works, the intriguing thing is from October - now no story below 4k words has made the box. And before you say they did not have the views, I would point out that includes a SSAE story that clocked in at 3k words, and that man is the second most watched on the site. So when I say this is unusual, I mean that.
As she turns around to leave this is ween you take a yard stic to her flank and give her a lesson in human disaplin. Befor geting vilent and shoving its whole langth in her plot whole
What an asshole. xD
Is this canon with the original, or My Little Rarity?
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Authors note at the bottom:
Non canon in the Non-Bronyverse
I understand Thinking Brain's job but she is acting like a bitch
And I said *looks around* Biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitch!
TD then pulls out a gun and shoots Thinking Brain in the back and says "Go to Tartarus, Thinking Bitch." Then shoots her in the head.
She's honestly being unfair to TD when he's just a guest lecturer for a single subject. It's not his fault Cheerilee came down sick and forgot to leave a lesson plan; does she not understand the concept of circumstances out of his control?
That being said, I look forward to the retribution!
Well this guy has 8 incomplete stories, so I guess updates are going to be slow. Maybe if you concentrate on complete some of the smaller ones, it could lead to more time for the larger stories, which may lead to faster updates and everybody'll be happy!
2806548 Most of my incomplete ones are cancelled. Decades of Sorrow, Annulment, Third Age Pony Slasher, they're probably never going to be completed. I published a new Word is Fear chapter just today, and Princess Celestia Gets Mugged is finished. On top of that, the latest chapter of Wanderings of a Non-Brony has been sent to the pre-readers. This story was more to kill time, not detract from the other ones.
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Forgot what blog I read it in, but the 4k word minimum to get into the feature box has been lowered to 2k.
Congrats BronyWriter on being featured!!!! Again!!! What's that make this.... Like...... 20 features?
Its funny...I haven't even read this story yet..... But I still liked and faved!!!!! I have to much faith in BronyWriter... Tis a good thing!!!!
Oddly enough I know a guy like Thinking Brain.
I usally never comment on this guy's story, mostly because there really nothing really that I need to say that hasn't been said before, but...
All I have to say is, if to say I was there or I was basically in the story or whatever, you get picture. Well, I would, "You do realize that is just some of the possiabilities of why that is happening. I mean, you don't even know for sure what is happening, and it's just best to leave TD alone and let him do his things. Besides, 'B's' are good, not bad. Sure, A's would be better, but at least it's something."
I feel this comment was a little pontless to write, but whatever, i'll be going to try to finish up a chapter that i'm writing for a fic now, and hopefully I can get it doe before four days. Besides, it's only 13,000 words long, and i'm still not there to where the main point of the chapter is. why I am telling you this, I have no idea.
*Walsk away and does other stuff.*