A year after the events of "A True Lesson," Scootaloo decides to return to Cloudsdale to prove herself. Meanwhile, Sweetie Belle's stuck singing in a talent show and Apple Bloom is participating in Applebucking season. But, little do the three fillies know of the wonder that awaits them that will change their lives forever.
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I thought it was a good story, but it felt like it felt like you squeezed a lot of infomation into one chapter. I think if there were a few more chaptersit would've felt right, but it was still a good story. I especially liked the fact that Scootaloo got her cutie mark first and helped the others get theirs.
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Sorry there was supposed to be a space between "chapters" and "it".
Please feel free to leave any kind of critisism. Good or bad! You wont hurt my feelings. ;)
The 11 docters action theme was playing my head when I read.
Scootaloo doesn't have a rainbow mane. There fore making it impossible for Scoot to do a Sonic Rainboom. Sorry I can't have imperfection when it comes to Dashie and Scoot
I am feeling a happiness beyond words!
2799900 I've heard the romurs that a rainboom is the color of the main.if this is correct, it would be a somoc pinkboom.