Lukas, along with his squad had one mission during the fall of reach that one mission was ruined for Lukas because he was the last one out, after all, last one out gets the lights. Its a shame someone got the lights at his destination before he could reach it, now he is somewhere unexpected and he doesn't like it.
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I have a feeling that this i s going to be a great story
I hate cliffhangers
'Nothing ventured...nothing gained' Did you just make a Halo Wars reference? Oh man I was just going to favorite-but I think that deserves a like.
Interesting...this is going on my 'read later' list.
Definitely a read later AND a favorite.
i found the chapter really good
Is it just me or was RD a little more Fluttershy when meeting Lukas?
2804723 I thought maybe even RD would be a little intimidated by the guy that is twice her size and killed a manticore like it was childs play. Meh just my opinion.
2805136 don't worry opinions is what makes us individuals
Bavaria should not have a h in it
2806227 I knew something looked wrong about that, I've actually been there a few times and there are family friends who live there. I'll fix that right now, thanks for pointing that out :)
2806614 your welcome
Im a huge halo fan and most of the stories don't interest me but you, you have made a story that has piqued my interest, therefore i applaud you and keep it up.
I just read these first three chapters my self and I realized all the silly grammar mistakes
Hopefully i caught them all.
Thanks for the support guys :P
Also on a side note, have you guys listened to Daft Punk's new album? its awesome.
A jetpack toting ODST in Equestria with Dash? You have my attention
i like it
i laughed
2811990 I love your profile picture, it brings me so much joy
2811999 yup
Yesh, I'm really sorry for the short chapter, i promise the next one will be longer, i just felt like i needed to throw something out there. and I felt like the use of a jetpack is a pretty god way to end a chapter.
I HATE HALO
SCREW MASTER CHEIF SCREW THE SPARTANS
A SPACE MARINE PWNS HALO
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And thus thy Emporer was disgraced by thee's sentence at which suggested killing his own brothers.
indeed, jetpacks are fun indeed.... quite
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every time some one says that, exactly one god emperor of mankind dies... and you just killed the only one with your HERESY!!
Commisar Fuklaw does not approve!
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2812179 considering everything in warhammer is OP as balls...
but halo is still awesome!
Jet packs...fun in a pack.
I would've grabbed dash and been like "to infinity, AND BEYOND!" Why? For the bloody hell'of it course!
Awww yeaaaaa jet packs are fun as hell
as military its OORAH but how really cares some say it that way too, but sweet story man big halo fan i'm expecting a lot of wall to wall action"MARINE CORE!"
its hella fun schoolen noobs HAHAHA
DEATH FROM ABOVE
2799332 and it I have a felling it might get bloody
2812179 SPEECE MURINS!!!
I don't care what you like. I'm a big fan of both.
2812325 You continue to bring me joy with these amazing pictures :)
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nostalgia, anyone?
2815582 same here
spess mehreens
way to headbutt a shield at high speeds
Nice job and have a happy 4th of july
And behold a pale celestia with a twilight sparkle upon her back.
Wait.....head+afterburners^shield=pain
Could've gone worse, Celestia could've just vaporized him instantly...
Its been a week OP...and BTW make this chapters longer!!
I got back from supercon yesterday and I haven't had the chance to write, but I will start as soon as possible, most likely later today because it is 1:48 in the morning so I should sleep.
and I promise to make the chapters longer, sorry for the wait.
Well, this is a great story. Have fun in Germany.
I love this story, nuff' said. have fun in the Deutschland!
I have got to commend you on your writing skills, no glaring errors or anything and you made the characters fun and enjoyable so far as well as in character, like Lukas actually doesn't reveal fucking everything right from the get go which i see in alot of halo fics and that he's not damn silent hard-ass which is great, he's just like buck or mickey or better anyways i love it and keep it up!
The doctor is in. What do you get the doctor for his birthday? A shotgun!
nice work and have fun in germany
Germany is awesome
Overall this is a nice story, a little bit too straight forward but nice.
Thanks for sticking with me through this long ass wait.
Right now I'm sitting in an internet cafe called "Orange" in this little town in Bavaria, Germany, this is actually the place where I envisioned Lukas coming from, its pretty cool, but honestly, its fucking small. Imagine a one way street in America, yeah that's basically every street here except its not one way. Anyways, thats all for now.